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    • Heather Boyd
      Heather Boyd @Gary Wilkinson last edited by Heather Boyd

      @Gary-Wilkinson

      Hi, I like the story of #2 and #3 but #3 visually catches my eye first with "aww it is so cute that chucky dragon". #2 story and #3 story are funny, for those reasons I chose them.

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      • kylebeaudette
        kylebeaudette last edited by

        Number 2. Your cute style plus a slightly sinister story= hilarity πŸ˜…

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        • deboraht
          deboraht last edited by

          I like 1 and 3 the best. Good work!

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          • Melanie Daigle
            Melanie Daigle last edited by

            I adore #3! What a great concept. Dragonflies helping a dragon fly. Love it! πŸ™‚

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            • Jacy13
              Jacy13 @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

              @Gary-Wilkinson I really like numbers 1 and 3! They are both super cute and would work wonderfully πŸ˜ƒ

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              • xin li
                xin li last edited by

                No.3 is a really fun concept :-). I read "friendship" immediately. Great work.

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                • carriecopadraws
                  carriecopadraws SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  @Gary-Wilkinson I like #3, it has a cute story with a lot of visual appeal.

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    #3 is pretty cool. I've gotta put my vote in for #2 though since it's so... unique (strange in a good way πŸ™‚ )

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                    • theprairiefox
                      theprairiefox last edited by

                      I would agree that #2 and #3 are the most promising. I know that the judges like having a funny hook in the picture. I think either of these would fit that bill.

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                      • Graham Williams
                        Graham Williams @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson number 3 is very good and very creative!

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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                          @Gary-Wilkinson Number one grabs my eye the most. I think it is the cleanest composition, quickest read, and most appealing. Three would be my second pick but one really stands out for me... i think the joy of it may be a big part of its appeal.

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                          • Jade Vaughan
                            Jade Vaughan last edited by

                            @Gary-Wilkinson #3 is really charming concept though I wonder if something about it could match the dynamism of #1. #2 hilariously reminds me of something in the invader zim universe. #4 I like the idea of a costume but I feel the family portrait overshadows that focus. Not sure this helps but do whichever feels strongest in your minds eye πŸ™‚

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                            • Coley
                              Coley last edited by

                              Number three! So fun!

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                              • K
                                Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                1 and 3 are my faves, but I love 3 the most. So sweet!

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                                • frankiiij
                                  frankiiij last edited by

                                  #1 is just so lovely. Even if you don’t use that one for the arena. Just print frame and put it up just like that. I think it is dope.

                                  Much love and God bless!

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                                  • Gary Wilkinson
                                    Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                    Thank you for all the comments and advice. No. 3 seems to be a popular choice and I quite like the cheeriness of the scene so i'll try work on that one. Did a couple of color studies that I think might work well, I think ill have quite the task illustrating the dragonflies but if I add some near the foreground it should read better.

                                    Also thinking to add some dragons in the background with a look of confusion and anger at the happy dragon.

                                    firefly2.jpg

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                                      aprilshin @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                      @Gary-Wilkinson Oh my gosh, I love this idea so much!! It is so sweet and so adorbs!! Love the colors/lighting you chose, too. ❀

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                        @Gary-Wilkinson beautiful! i love the red one.

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                                        • hakepe
                                          hakepe @Gary Wilkinson last edited by hakepe

                                          @Gary-Wilkinson I like the colors in the first one because it really makes the character pop.

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                                          • Heather Boyd
                                            Heather Boyd @Gary Wilkinson last edited by Heather Boyd

                                            @Gary-Wilkinson I like the red because I feel it is more dynamic while I like the lightness/weight (as the colour makes the dragon appear to be able to flutter on air better) of the yellow one -so now I can't decide. Oh bother. lols

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