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    • theprairiefox
      theprairiefox last edited by

      I would agree that #2 and #3 are the most promising. I know that the judges like having a funny hook in the picture. I think either of these would fit that bill.

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      • Graham Williams
        Graham Williams @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

        @Gary-Wilkinson number 3 is very good and very creative!

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          @Gary-Wilkinson Number one grabs my eye the most. I think it is the cleanest composition, quickest read, and most appealing. Three would be my second pick but one really stands out for me... i think the joy of it may be a big part of its appeal.

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          • Jade Vaughan
            Jade Vaughan last edited by

            @Gary-Wilkinson #3 is really charming concept though I wonder if something about it could match the dynamism of #1. #2 hilariously reminds me of something in the invader zim universe. #4 I like the idea of a costume but I feel the family portrait overshadows that focus. Not sure this helps but do whichever feels strongest in your minds eye πŸ™‚

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              Number three! So fun!

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                Kat SVS OG last edited by

                1 and 3 are my faves, but I love 3 the most. So sweet!

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                • frankiiij
                  frankiiij last edited by

                  #1 is just so lovely. Even if you don’t use that one for the arena. Just print frame and put it up just like that. I think it is dope.

                  Much love and God bless!

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                  • Gary Wilkinson
                    Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    Thank you for all the comments and advice. No. 3 seems to be a popular choice and I quite like the cheeriness of the scene so i'll try work on that one. Did a couple of color studies that I think might work well, I think ill have quite the task illustrating the dragonflies but if I add some near the foreground it should read better.

                    Also thinking to add some dragons in the background with a look of confusion and anger at the happy dragon.

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                      aprilshin @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                      @Gary-Wilkinson Oh my gosh, I love this idea so much!! It is so sweet and so adorbs!! Love the colors/lighting you chose, too. ❀

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson beautiful! i love the red one.

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                        • hakepe
                          hakepe @Gary Wilkinson last edited by hakepe

                          @Gary-Wilkinson I like the colors in the first one because it really makes the character pop.

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                          • Heather Boyd
                            Heather Boyd @Gary Wilkinson last edited by Heather Boyd

                            @Gary-Wilkinson I like the red because I feel it is more dynamic while I like the lightness/weight (as the colour makes the dragon appear to be able to flutter on air better) of the yellow one -so now I can't decide. Oh bother. lols

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                            • JoshuaDages
                              JoshuaDages last edited by

                              What a great concept! I really like the yellow one. Seems to contrast a little better with the blue sky to me. Also love the idea of the angry dragon in the background!

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                              • Jade Vaughan
                                Jade Vaughan @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                @Gary-Wilkinson so so cute!! Love the yellow one. I think it gives a nice contrast to the sky and doesn't blend with the purple of the dragonflies.

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                                • Eric Droke
                                  Eric Droke last edited by

                                  @Gary-Wilkinson, this is such a sweet concept! LOVE the dragon being carried by the dragonflies. I think i like the yellow one best. Not sure about having other dragons poking heads out of the clouds, though. Makes me ask, "If that dragon needs to be carried in order to fly, how did those other dragons get up there?" I think you'll be fine to just keep it simple and have just the one dragon. Keep up the great work, bro!

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                                  • Graham Williams
                                    Graham Williams @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                    @Gary-Wilkinson I like yellow best. It has more of that rubber ducky kids toy feeling. I hope you forget to enter the contest. This one doesn’t have to be submitted until September πŸ˜ƒ

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                                    • alicia
                                      alicia last edited by

                                      This is so adorable! I love it! I agree that the yellow looks best. I really pops against the blue background better. Fabulous job!

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                                        Mara Price @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                        @Gary-Wilkinson The red one is so lovely.

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                                        • Laurel Aylesworth
                                          Laurel Aylesworth @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                          @Gary-Wilkinson Can you please do all of them? lol

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                                          • Gary Wilkinson
                                            Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                            Thank you for everyone's comments! It waas hard to choose between yellow or red, but I agree with what some of you mentioned about the color balance and making the dragon feel lighter. Slowly working on it now and if I ever get the time I might paint the boy flying on the dragonfly at a later point πŸ™‚

                                            firefly4.jpg

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