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    Lifeguard Yeti WIP - Looking for critiques and opinions

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Nicolas Gagnon-Fee last edited by

      @Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee this is the most unique take I’ve seen so far. Great job!

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      • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
        Nicolas Gagnon-Fee @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

        @Nyrryl-Cadiz wow, thank you very much! ☺️

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        • K
          Kat SVS OG last edited by

          Def a moody teen - perfect for a lifeguard. How about maybe a bit more fur on the face so he looks more yeti and not like an ape? Fun character!

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          • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
            Nicolas Gagnon-Fee @Kat last edited by

            @Kat thanks for the feedback, it’s very appreciated and useful! 🙂

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            • Kristin Dudish
              Kristin Dudish last edited by

              @Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee Such a fun take on the prompt! I think you've totally nailed the moody-but-trying-to-be-chill teen slouch in the last image!

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              • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
                Nicolas Gagnon-Fee @Kristin Dudish last edited by

                @Kristin-Dudish thank you! 😊

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @Nicolas Gagnon-Fee last edited by

                  @Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee these are amazing character sketches! Can’t wait to see the final!

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                  • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
                    Nicolas Gagnon-Fee @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @powsupermum thank you so much! 😊

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                    • DaveLeekArt
                      DaveLeekArt @Nicolas Gagnon-Fee last edited by

                      @Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee hey man, these are killer! I’m with you on the bottom right one being the best direction. He looks the most like a teen. And I happen to like the moody look. I’m glad you’re entering the contest, can’t wait to see you in the critique arena. Welcome to the forum by the way:)

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                      • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
                        Nicolas Gagnon-Fee @DaveLeekArt last edited by

                        @DaveLeekArt thank you very much, it means a lot 🙂

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                        • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
                          Nicolas Gagnon-Fee last edited by

                          I did some more sketches and modifications, giving him a bit more range (he can look like a shy and awkward teen, now, too!). I'm thinking of maybe pushing the shapes and proportions a bit further. What do you all think?

                          Yeti Exploration 2.jpg
                          Yeti Exploration 3.jpg

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                          • Georgios Christopoulos
                            Georgios Christopoulos @Nicolas Gagnon-Fee last edited by

                            @Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee love his hair! Especially the top right hair doodle, is spot on!!

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                            • Nicolas Gagnon-Fee
                              Nicolas Gagnon-Fee @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                              @Georgios-Christopoulos thanks - and noted! 😁

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