Lifeguard Yeti WIP - Looking for critiques and opinions

[Kat]

Def a moody teen - perfect for a lifeguard. How about maybe a bit more fur on the face so he looks more yeti and not like an ape? Fun character!

[Nicolas Gagnon-Fee]

@Kat thanks for the feedback, it’s very appreciated and useful!

[Kristin Dudish]

@Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee Such a fun take on the prompt! I think you've totally nailed the moody-but-trying-to-be-chill teen slouch in the last image!

[Nicolas Gagnon-Fee]

@Kristin-Dudish thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

@Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee these are amazing character sketches! Can’t wait to see the final!

[Nicolas Gagnon-Fee]

@powsupermum thank you so much!

[DaveLeekArt]

@Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee hey man, these are killer! I’m with you on the bottom right one being the best direction. He looks the most like a teen. And I happen to like the moody look. I’m glad you’re entering the contest, can’t wait to see you in the critique arena. Welcome to the forum by the way:)

[Nicolas Gagnon-Fee]

@DaveLeekArt thank you very much, it means a lot

[Nicolas Gagnon-Fee]

I did some more sketches and modifications, giving him a bit more range (he can look like a shy and awkward teen, now, too!). I'm thinking of maybe pushing the shapes and proportions a bit further. What do you all think?

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@Nicolas-Gagnon-Fee love his hair! Especially the top right hair doodle, is spot on!!

[Nicolas Gagnon-Fee]

@Georgios-Christopoulos thanks - and noted!