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    • ChrisConnor
      ChrisConnor last edited by

      Hey everyone, I've been working on some new illustrations for a small series I'm making with the theme of lions but with a twist. Each image is a lion that belongs to one of the elements. So far I've finished earth and water with fire and air left to do.
      I've mainly been focusing on composition, lighting and focus points in mind. After receiving some amazing advice from other members of this forum on previously posted work, it's really upped my game and I wanted to share some new images.
      Hope you like. Feel free to leave constructive feedback if you see somewhere to improve 🙂

      SmartSelect_20210324-191149_Gallery.jpg SmartSelect_20210324-191134_Gallery.jpg

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      • Jeremy Ross
        Jeremy Ross @ChrisConnor last edited by

        Very cool @ChrisConnor!

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        • ChrisConnor
          ChrisConnor @Jeremy Ross last edited by

          @Jeremy-Ross Thank you so much 🙂

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          • APHOTICMOTH
            APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

            Creative, can't wait to see more of this series.

            The first piece is pretty flat, in terms of tone. You have 2 little spots with really dark shadow, but not much for shadow anywhere else. Shadows add depth.

            Your second piece handles the tone better, it could use a little help in that area too, but it is better than the first piece.

            All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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              • ChrisConnor
                ChrisConnor @APHOTICMOTH last edited by

                @CLCanadyArts thanks for your feedback. Yes I see what you mean. I've also noticed that uploading to this has made all the colours flatter. I've just looked at the original file in the software and it's more vibrant for sure. As for the tone and shadows, I've taken this on board. I've attached a new upload edits!

                SmartSelect_20210325-173417_Gallery.jpg

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                • ChrisConnor
                  ChrisConnor last edited by

                  Hi guys, not sure if you are seeing this but here's the next one in the series.
                  'You're Highness'.
                  Screenshot_20210407-134936_Gallery.jpg

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                  • ChrisConnor
                    ChrisConnor @ChrisConnor last edited by

                    I'm also aware there is a rogue whisker so ignore please 😅🤦🏼‍♂️

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