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    March WIP - Fairytale Flower - final touches

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    • K.Flagg
      K.Flagg last edited by

      Looks great! I think the shadow is a nice touch since it draws your eye back toward the center.

      K.Flagg

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      • carlianne
        carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

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        • carlianne
          carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

          @K-Flagg thank you, that is a great point!

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          • carlianne
            carlianne last edited by

            I wasn't feeling happy with the shadow, so I swapped out the pose and made some other changes, just trying to nail this down before I paint later

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            • carlianne
              carlianne @carlianne last edited by

              @carlianne starting to add color
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              • Natalie Lundeen
                Natalie Lundeen @carlianne last edited by

                @carlianne Ooh, this looks so good, Carli!

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                • carlianne
                  carlianne last edited by

                  I didn't like my layout, so I am trying to make one of the poses more of a focal point

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                  • K.Flagg
                    K.Flagg last edited by

                    I like the new layout better! Looks good!

                    K.Flagg

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                    • carlianne
                      carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

                      @K-Flagg @Natalie-Lundeen thank you!! ❤

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                        jdubz last edited by

                        I like the newer layout structurally! It's has a nicer flow. I think the only potential problem is the "close up" on the face - it's the same size almost as the one below it in the pose. I think even if you decreased the name a little bit and made the face just a bit bigger that would help separate it.

                        Josh White
                        https://www.instagram.com/joshwhiteillustration/

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                        • carlianne
                          carlianne @jdubz last edited by

                          @jdubz Great point! I've adjusted it 🙂

                          Now Deciding on a background treatment. Do you all prefer dark or light bg?
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                          • jakecrowe
                            jakecrowe @carlianne last edited by

                            @carlianne I love the texture in the dark background.

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                            • APHOTICMOTH
                              APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                              I love the dark bg, hard to say why though. Her wings stand out more, and it makes the other colors feel richer.

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                              • carlianne
                                carlianne last edited by carlianne

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                                getting close to calling it done! Any final feedback or ideas?? Wing glow yes/no?

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                                • carlianne
                                  carlianne last edited by

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                                  alright I'm calling it a night!

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                                  • jaepereira
                                    jaepereira SVS OG @carlianne last edited by

                                    @carlianne I really like that wing glow effect.

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                                    • Dima Eichhorn
                                      Dima Eichhorn @carlianne last edited by

                                      @carlianne Your character is so cute❤️

                                      https://www.instagram.com/dima_eichhorn/

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                                      • carlianne
                                        carlianne @jaepereira last edited by

                                        @jaepereira @Dima-Eichhorn thank you!! ❤️

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