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    March WIP - Fairytale Flower - final touches

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    • carlianne
      carlianne last edited by

      I wasn't feeling happy with the shadow, so I swapped out the pose and made some other changes, just trying to nail this down before I paint later

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      • carlianne
        carlianne @carlianne last edited by

        @carlianne starting to add color
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        • Natalie Lundeen
          Natalie Lundeen @carlianne last edited by

          @carlianne Ooh, this looks so good, Carli!

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          • carlianne
            carlianne last edited by

            I didn't like my layout, so I am trying to make one of the poses more of a focal point

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            • K.Flagg
              K.Flagg last edited by

              I like the new layout better! Looks good!

              K.Flagg

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              • carlianne
                carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

                @K-Flagg @Natalie-Lundeen thank you!! ❤

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                  jdubz last edited by

                  I like the newer layout structurally! It's has a nicer flow. I think the only potential problem is the "close up" on the face - it's the same size almost as the one below it in the pose. I think even if you decreased the name a little bit and made the face just a bit bigger that would help separate it.

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                  • carlianne
                    carlianne @jdubz last edited by

                    @jdubz Great point! I've adjusted it 🙂

                    Now Deciding on a background treatment. Do you all prefer dark or light bg?
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                    • jakecrowe
                      jakecrowe @carlianne last edited by

                      @carlianne I love the texture in the dark background.

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                      • APHOTICMOTH
                        APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                        I love the dark bg, hard to say why though. Her wings stand out more, and it makes the other colors feel richer.

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                        • carlianne
                          carlianne last edited by carlianne

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                          getting close to calling it done! Any final feedback or ideas?? Wing glow yes/no?

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                          • carlianne
                            carlianne last edited by

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                            alright I'm calling it a night!

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                            • jaepereira
                              jaepereira SVS OG @carlianne last edited by

                              @carlianne I really like that wing glow effect.

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                              • Dima Eichhorn
                                Dima Eichhorn @carlianne last edited by

                                @carlianne Your character is so cute❤️

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                                • carlianne
                                  carlianne @jaepereira last edited by

                                  @jaepereira @Dima-Eichhorn thank you!! ❤️

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