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    March WIP - Fairytale Flower - final touches

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    • carlianne
      carlianne last edited by

      I didn't like my layout, so I am trying to make one of the poses more of a focal point

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      • K.Flagg
        K.Flagg last edited by

        I like the new layout better! Looks good!

        K.Flagg

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        • carlianne
          carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

          @K-Flagg @Natalie-Lundeen thank you!! ❤

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            jdubz last edited by

            I like the newer layout structurally! It's has a nicer flow. I think the only potential problem is the "close up" on the face - it's the same size almost as the one below it in the pose. I think even if you decreased the name a little bit and made the face just a bit bigger that would help separate it.

            Josh White
            https://www.instagram.com/joshwhiteillustration/

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            • carlianne
              carlianne @jdubz last edited by

              @jdubz Great point! I've adjusted it 🙂

              Now Deciding on a background treatment. Do you all prefer dark or light bg?
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              • jakecrowe
                jakecrowe @carlianne last edited by

                @carlianne I love the texture in the dark background.

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                • APHOTICMOTH
                  APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                  I love the dark bg, hard to say why though. Her wings stand out more, and it makes the other colors feel richer.

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                  • carlianne
                    carlianne last edited by carlianne

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                    getting close to calling it done! Any final feedback or ideas?? Wing glow yes/no?

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                    • carlianne
                      carlianne last edited by

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                      alright I'm calling it a night!

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                      • jaepereira
                        jaepereira SVS OG @carlianne last edited by

                        @carlianne I really like that wing glow effect.

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                        • Dima Eichhorn
                          Dima Eichhorn @carlianne last edited by

                          @carlianne Your character is so cute❤️

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                          • carlianne
                            carlianne @jaepereira last edited by

                            @jaepereira @Dima-Eichhorn thank you!! ❤️

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