Riley's adventure

[mymightypencil]

My 1st draft of Riley. Feedback welcome. Peace and love from the UK.

[jenn]

@mymightypencil this is a fun take on the subject!

[Miriam]

@mymightypencil The garage IS the project! That's a fun take on the prompt.

It looks great!

A couple little bits of advice to consider:

• You might want to give that little moon at the bottom more 'space' by moving the line between lighter & darker blue, or moving the moon to overlap the line.
• Riley's expression seems very understated. (Insert friendly poke about Brits not showing emotion.)
  The low, downward slanted brows, and the low cheeks lean slightly toward a sad or somber feeling, but she does look pleased, or maybe like she's marveling at the sights.
  ‑ You might want to try moving the eyebrows or adding a curve to make them friendlier / happier.
  ‑ You could experiment with moving the cheeks up — closer to the eyes. I think that on its own would brighten up her expression (but I'm not sure if that would leave too much empty space at the bottom of her face).
  ‑ You also could consider lightening the cheeks.
  ‑ Moving the mouth down could also change the expression.

Here are some little tweaks for comparison:

[mymightypencil]

@miriam that's so kind of you to take your time to give that feedback thank you. You're absolutely right about her expression, so I've made her ever so slightly happier and played with the layout of her face a little too.