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    • Patricia Dishmon
      Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos Cute! And I agree with @Kristen-Lango The bright color of the plane was great! If you do put a bright colored character in there, don't forget to tie the colors into the balloon.

      Also, why is it that I suddenly feel that the white at the bottom is too white? I'd take the whole background and shift it down so that there are only a few spots of white (maybe from lightning?) and fill in the top with that really dark gray.

      I can't wait to see the next update! You work so quickly 😃

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

        @Kristen-Lango thanks yes I’ve added more detail now

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

          Still a work in progress!
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          • Valerie Light
            Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos ooh, i love this green pattern against the dark sky! 😍

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            • Kristen Lango
              Kristen Lango @Valerie Light last edited by

              @Asyas_illos me too! what @Valerie-Light said!

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

                @Valerie-Light @Kristen-Lango thank you 😊

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Not much progress here been writing a lot lately😊
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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Might add a couple more balloons caught in the storm
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                    • Katherine
                      Katherine @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos I think the hot air balloon concept is a winner, Asya! You could have fun experimenting with lots of different compositions and perspectives with this. I'd definitely play around with a composition that brings the hot air balloon forward so we can see the expression on their faces and the gestures better. Maybe there's some action going on in the basket that tells a bit of a story?

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @Katherine last edited by

                        @Katherine thank you for the suggestions! I’ll definitely be playing around to see how I can deliver the best story and composition.

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                          I added a couple more balloons, what do you guys think? Does the composition still work? I still want the green balloon to be the main focal point. Also I keep going back and forth if I want the lighting or not. I’m thinking not, I don’t want people to think anyone is in danger then again it might lend a hand in the story? I don’t know…
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                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            I also started another one… 😳
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                            • Kim Rosenlof
                              Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos I love the green against the background, and the pattern on it is really great!. There is a tangent with the cloud and the yellow balloon, and the color red is pulling may eye toward the one in the bottom left even though it is not a bright red. Have you tried a more muted color instead of red?

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                              • Kristen Lango
                                Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos haha I know the feeling of starting another one and stressing yourself out a bit 😁 I love to see your multiple entries!

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                  @Kim-Rosenlof I was worried about that I’ll play with it a bit more. Thanks.

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                                    Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                    I toned down the red but just a tiny bit. Also added one more ballon so add to the chaos! Character design as well9481DF0C-917E-4417-8B9D-02892C247427.jpeg

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      Think I’m done with this one does anybody have any last minute feedback?kids got me sick so it might be slow going for my next one.
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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        Decided to illustrate a page from my book for another entry
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                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          Gonna see if I can get one more done…
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