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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      Not much progress here been writing a lot lately😊
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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        Might add a couple more balloons caught in the storm
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        • Katherine
          Katherine @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I think the hot air balloon concept is a winner, Asya! You could have fun experimenting with lots of different compositions and perspectives with this. I'd definitely play around with a composition that brings the hot air balloon forward so we can see the expression on their faces and the gestures better. Maybe there's some action going on in the basket that tells a bit of a story?

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @Katherine last edited by

            @Katherine thank you for the suggestions! I’ll definitely be playing around to see how I can deliver the best story and composition.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              I added a couple more balloons, what do you guys think? Does the composition still work? I still want the green balloon to be the main focal point. Also I keep going back and forth if I want the lighting or not. I’m thinking not, I don’t want people to think anyone is in danger then again it might lend a hand in the story? I don’t know…
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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                I also started another one… 😳
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                • Kim Rosenlof
                  Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos I love the green against the background, and the pattern on it is really great!. There is a tangent with the cloud and the yellow balloon, and the color red is pulling may eye toward the one in the bottom left even though it is not a bright red. Have you tried a more muted color instead of red?

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                  • Kristen Lango
                    Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos haha I know the feeling of starting another one and stressing yourself out a bit 😁 I love to see your multiple entries!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                      @Kim-Rosenlof I was worried about that I’ll play with it a bit more. Thanks.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                        I toned down the red but just a tiny bit. Also added one more ballon so add to the chaos! Character design as well9481DF0C-917E-4417-8B9D-02892C247427.jpeg

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Think I’m done with this one does anybody have any last minute feedback?kids got me sick so it might be slow going for my next one.
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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Decided to illustrate a page from my book for another entry
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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              Gonna see if I can get one more done…
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                              • Asyas_illos
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                                • PenAndrew
                                  PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by PenAndrew

                                  @Asyas_illos I think your images are definitely stronger when we can see the characters. I guess this is number 4? I am sticking with just the one entry even though I do have more ideas.

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                                    @PenAndrew thank you character design is my favorite I love drawing kids and people

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                                    • PenAndrew
                                      PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos Yes I am hoping that you will increase the size of the characters in the balloon, as I feel these are a bit lost.

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        I love costume design!
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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          I’m wonder if my illustration is too dark? What do you guys think? I could add a lightening bolt and get some light in there that way or maybe a spell?
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                                          • patricialamas
                                            patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos The evenness of value throughout does kind of muddle the image, particularly around the front figure’s face. I often find it helpful to switch to greyscale so it’s easier to see what needs value adjustments. A light source of some sort to highlight the focal points would probably help a lot!

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