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    • Kim Rosenlof
      Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos I love the green against the background, and the pattern on it is really great!. There is a tangent with the cloud and the yellow balloon, and the color red is pulling may eye toward the one in the bottom left even though it is not a bright red. Have you tried a more muted color instead of red?

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      • Kristen Lango
        Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos haha I know the feeling of starting another one and stressing yourself out a bit 😁 I love to see your multiple entries!

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

          @Kim-Rosenlof I was worried about that I’ll play with it a bit more. Thanks.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

            I toned down the red but just a tiny bit. Also added one more ballon so add to the chaos! Character design as well9481DF0C-917E-4417-8B9D-02892C247427.jpeg

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Think I’m done with this one does anybody have any last minute feedback?kids got me sick so it might be slow going for my next one.
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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                Decided to illustrate a page from my book for another entry
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Gonna see if I can get one more done…
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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

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                    • PenAndrew
                      PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by PenAndrew

                      @Asyas_illos I think your images are definitely stronger when we can see the characters. I guess this is number 4? I am sticking with just the one entry even though I do have more ideas.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                        @PenAndrew thank you character design is my favorite I love drawing kids and people

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                        • PenAndrew
                          PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos Yes I am hoping that you will increase the size of the characters in the balloon, as I feel these are a bit lost.

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            I love costume design!
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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              I’m wonder if my illustration is too dark? What do you guys think? I could add a lightening bolt and get some light in there that way or maybe a spell?
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                              • patricialamas
                                patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos The evenness of value throughout does kind of muddle the image, particularly around the front figure’s face. I often find it helpful to switch to greyscale so it’s easier to see what needs value adjustments. A light source of some sort to highlight the focal points would probably help a lot!

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Ok so here’s where I am at currently. I’m going to play around with lighting and see how it goes…BA039761-F5C1-41B4-BE0A-0D685D036725.jpeg

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Think k I’m gonna call it with this light !
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                                    • patricialamas
                                      patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos that definitely did the trick! Love it!

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @patricialamas last edited by

                                        @patricialamas thank you!

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                          Working on a sister illustration I love these characters so much I had to bring them inside! And yes I’ve been watching a bit of Harry Potter…just need the characters!
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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            Contemplating on using this as an entry too. The storm is not very prevalent. What do you guys think?A818983C-22F3-4E06-BAC0-EED186FB1943.jpeg

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