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    • Kristen Lango
      Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos haha I know the feeling of starting another one and stressing yourself out a bit 😁 I love to see your multiple entries!

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

        @Kim-Rosenlof I was worried about that I’ll play with it a bit more. Thanks.

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

          I toned down the red but just a tiny bit. Also added one more ballon so add to the chaos! Character design as well9481DF0C-917E-4417-8B9D-02892C247427.jpeg

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            Think I’m done with this one does anybody have any last minute feedback?kids got me sick so it might be slow going for my next one.
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Decided to illustrate a page from my book for another entry
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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                Gonna see if I can get one more done…
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                  • PenAndrew
                    PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by PenAndrew

                    @Asyas_illos I think your images are definitely stronger when we can see the characters. I guess this is number 4? I am sticking with just the one entry even though I do have more ideas.

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                      @PenAndrew thank you character design is my favorite I love drawing kids and people

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                      • PenAndrew
                        PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos Yes I am hoping that you will increase the size of the characters in the balloon, as I feel these are a bit lost.

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          I love costume design!
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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            I’m wonder if my illustration is too dark? What do you guys think? I could add a lightening bolt and get some light in there that way or maybe a spell?
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                            • patricialamas
                              patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos The evenness of value throughout does kind of muddle the image, particularly around the front figure’s face. I often find it helpful to switch to greyscale so it’s easier to see what needs value adjustments. A light source of some sort to highlight the focal points would probably help a lot!

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Ok so here’s where I am at currently. I’m going to play around with lighting and see how it goes…BA039761-F5C1-41B4-BE0A-0D685D036725.jpeg

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Think k I’m gonna call it with this light !
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                                  • patricialamas
                                    patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos that definitely did the trick! Love it!

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @patricialamas last edited by

                                      @patricialamas thank you!

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                        Working on a sister illustration I love these characters so much I had to bring them inside! And yes I’ve been watching a bit of Harry Potter…just need the characters!
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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          Contemplating on using this as an entry too. The storm is not very prevalent. What do you guys think?A818983C-22F3-4E06-BAC0-EED186FB1943.jpeg

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                                          • jenn
                                            jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos this is so fun and I love the shapes. Maybe the (floating?) candles could be flickering/threatening to blow out and the door could be swinging open or curtains blowing due to the storm.

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