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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      Gonna see if I can get one more done…
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          PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by PenAndrew

          @Asyas_illos I think your images are definitely stronger when we can see the characters. I guess this is number 4? I am sticking with just the one entry even though I do have more ideas.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

            @PenAndrew thank you character design is my favorite I love drawing kids and people

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              PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos Yes I am hoping that you will increase the size of the characters in the balloon, as I feel these are a bit lost.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                I love costume design!
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  I’m wonder if my illustration is too dark? What do you guys think? I could add a lightening bolt and get some light in there that way or maybe a spell?
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                    patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos The evenness of value throughout does kind of muddle the image, particularly around the front figure’s face. I often find it helpful to switch to greyscale so it’s easier to see what needs value adjustments. A light source of some sort to highlight the focal points would probably help a lot!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Ok so here’s where I am at currently. I’m going to play around with lighting and see how it goes…BA039761-F5C1-41B4-BE0A-0D685D036725.jpeg

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        Think k I’m gonna call it with this light !
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                          patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos that definitely did the trick! Love it!

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                            Asyas_illos @patricialamas last edited by

                            @patricialamas thank you!

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                              Working on a sister illustration I love these characters so much I had to bring them inside! And yes I’ve been watching a bit of Harry Potter…just need the characters!
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                                Contemplating on using this as an entry too. The storm is not very prevalent. What do you guys think?A818983C-22F3-4E06-BAC0-EED186FB1943.jpeg

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                                  jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos this is so fun and I love the shapes. Maybe the (floating?) candles could be flickering/threatening to blow out and the door could be swinging open or curtains blowing due to the storm.

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                                    Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                                    @jenn thank you for the feedback ! I should have thought of something like that before but I also wanted to convey a feeling of safety and warmth. I think I’m done at this point though…

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      Maybe not “stormy” enough for the judges but may as well enter it anyways!
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                                      • JessicaLinnEvans
                                        JessicaLinnEvans @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos Love the lighting from the floating candles! The orange highlights seem just right.

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                                          Asyas_illos @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

                                          @JessicaLinnEvans thank you!

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                                            Robert Henderson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos

                                            Awesome and very fun illustration to explore, the frog on the floor, the floating candles, the black cat and is that Ron playing chess?

                                            You might want to experiment with something in the foreground in the corners a little something overlapping the middle ground so it feels like we are moving into the scene.

                                            Very excited to see what you come up with. It has a lovely air of mystery to it. Nicely done!

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