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    • PenAndrew
      PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by PenAndrew

      @Asyas_illos I think your images are definitely stronger when we can see the characters. I guess this is number 4? I am sticking with just the one entry even though I do have more ideas.

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

        @PenAndrew thank you character design is my favorite I love drawing kids and people

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        • PenAndrew
          PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos Yes I am hoping that you will increase the size of the characters in the balloon, as I feel these are a bit lost.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            I love costume design!
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              I’m wonder if my illustration is too dark? What do you guys think? I could add a lightening bolt and get some light in there that way or maybe a spell?
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              • patricialamas
                patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos The evenness of value throughout does kind of muddle the image, particularly around the front figure’s face. I often find it helpful to switch to greyscale so it’s easier to see what needs value adjustments. A light source of some sort to highlight the focal points would probably help a lot!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Ok so here’s where I am at currently. I’m going to play around with lighting and see how it goes…BA039761-F5C1-41B4-BE0A-0D685D036725.jpeg

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Think k I’m gonna call it with this light !
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                    • patricialamas
                      patricialamas @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos that definitely did the trick! Love it!

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @patricialamas last edited by

                        @patricialamas thank you!

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                          Working on a sister illustration I love these characters so much I had to bring them inside! And yes I’ve been watching a bit of Harry Potter…just need the characters!
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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Contemplating on using this as an entry too. The storm is not very prevalent. What do you guys think?A818983C-22F3-4E06-BAC0-EED186FB1943.jpeg

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                            • jenn
                              jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos this is so fun and I love the shapes. Maybe the (floating?) candles could be flickering/threatening to blow out and the door could be swinging open or curtains blowing due to the storm.

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                                @jenn thank you for the feedback ! I should have thought of something like that before but I also wanted to convey a feeling of safety and warmth. I think I’m done at this point though…

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Maybe not “stormy” enough for the judges but may as well enter it anyways!
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                                  • JessicaLinnEvans
                                    JessicaLinnEvans @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos Love the lighting from the floating candles! The orange highlights seem just right.

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @JessicaLinnEvans last edited by

                                      @JessicaLinnEvans thank you!

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                                        Robert Henderson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos

                                        Awesome and very fun illustration to explore, the frog on the floor, the floating candles, the black cat and is that Ron playing chess?

                                        You might want to experiment with something in the foreground in the corners a little something overlapping the middle ground so it feels like we are moving into the scene.

                                        Very excited to see what you come up with. It has a lovely air of mystery to it. Nicely done!

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @Robert Henderson last edited by Asyas_illos

                                          @Robert-Henderson thank you! I appreciate your feedback! If you’re familiar with my stuff you’ll notice I usually avoid tons of details this was my attempt of pushing myself out of my comfort zone. Unfortunately I already submitted it and I don’t want to make any extra work for Austin, but something silhouetted in the foreground would’ve been killer! And no it’s not Ron in particular but maybe they’d have been buddies?!

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                                          • Valerie Light
                                            Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos I think this is CUTE! Love how you kept the palette contained. My eye moves between several sweet little focal points, but stays moving within the composition.
                                            You really nailed a whole atmosphere here.

                                            I know it's already submitted, but maybe for a future edit, consider neutralizing the strength the red blanket and bow behind the standing boy. That's the only thing that pulls focus, to me.

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