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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @Pamela Fraley last edited by

      @Pamela-Fraley I think you meant to tag @von_Nimmermehr ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰

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      • Pamela Fraley
        Pamela Fraley SVS OG @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

        @von_Nimmermehr Oh yea! Oops! ๐Ÿ˜„

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        • Pamela Fraley
          Pamela Fraley SVS OG @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

          @von_Nimmermehr That comment was for you! haha. Love your design!

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          • von_Nimmermehr
            von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

            So, after qritique arena, and seeing other people just having kind of the same idea as me (no hard feelings, i guess it was kind of obvious) I wanted to give it another try.

            I kind of liked the ship idea and i thougt it could be nice to have a tree thats looks like waves.

            • Do you think i got the perspective right?
              I kind of struggeled here, because the form of the ship is kind of challenging for me.
            • would you say, the dynamic/flow is okay here.

            you can just draw over if you feel the need. I learn better visually.

            since the critique arena is over, it's just about finishing a portfolio piece, because i alsway quit...but i want to have some finished portfolio pieces by the end of the year.

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            • AngelinaKizz
              AngelinaKizz @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

              @von_Nimmermehr looks really great so far!!!

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              • von_Nimmermehr
                von_Nimmermehr @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                @AngelinaKizz Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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                • von_Nimmermehr
                  von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                  here is my progress so far, im really enjoying my progress here.

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                  • von_Nimmermehr
                    von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                    can anyone help me out with the part of the ship i encircled?

                    I don't know why i struggle so much with this part รด_o
                    i tried it a few times now but it seems off to me

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                    • KevinTreaccar
                      KevinTreaccar @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                      @von_Nimmermehr I think the top line of your shipโ€™s elevated platform is too sloped.

                      Basically, as I imagine a straight line coming out of the front of the ship as well as the flat wall you have boxed, I see the lines. Or quite pointing in the same direction. The second level line looks to me like it would be point a little to the left based upon the direction that second level cubeโ€™s side is facing.

                      Is that making any sense?

                      Everything else looks correct to me.

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                      • von_Nimmermehr
                        von_Nimmermehr @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                        @KevinTreaccar

                        i dont think so, it fits perfectly into my grid i worked with.
                        Maybe i made something wrong thoug?

                        But i was more talking of the raling in the back...i cant figure it out thoug and also i dont know what to do with the front of the "box". just a window (I don't like the window Idea, since there already is a window)? Or a door? how big should a door be? Or how hight, i am sitting on that part for so long now its ridiculous

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                        • von_Nimmermehr
                          von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                          im getting closer to finish this peace....at least i didn't gibve up though.

                          Have you any recommendations how i can push the values more? i seems its just all the same values or maybe thats something i can fix later?

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                            @von_Nimmermehr oh wow I love how the tree looks like waves!

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                              A Former User @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                              @von_Nimmermehr I love the concept and the drawing is very lovely.

                              Have you tried to lighten the value of the tree leaves/waves? That might make the boat pop more for the viewer.

                              Such a lovely piece, excited to see where you take it.

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                              • von_Nimmermehr
                                von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                                Thanks @Asyas_illos i really fell in love with this idea and im happy i got it to work though.

                                @Stephanie-H i made the colors of the leaves a bit brighter, also i changes the color to a liiiiittle bit more saturated.

                                i think i'm about to finish it. I will sleep over it and take a look at it tomottow again with some fresh eyes.

                                Do you think it's a portfolio piece? It would be my very first portfolio piece. for now i'm quite happy, i finished it or at least am about to ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                                  Mara Price @Guest last edited by

                                  @Stephanie-H It's beautiful

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                                    A Former User @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

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                                    • von_Nimmermehr
                                      von_Nimmermehr @Guest last edited by

                                      @Stephanie-H love the Idea, havent thought of it but would look cute and cozy i guess. Thanks

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