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    • von_Nimmermehr
      von_Nimmermehr @AngelinaKizz last edited by

      @AngelinaKizz Thank you 🙂

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        von_Nimmermehr last edited by

        here is my progress so far, im really enjoying my progress here.

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          von_Nimmermehr last edited by

          can anyone help me out with the part of the ship i encircled?

          I don't know why i struggle so much with this part ô_o
          i tried it a few times now but it seems off to me

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            KevinTreaccar @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

            @von_Nimmermehr I think the top line of your ship’s elevated platform is too sloped.

            Basically, as I imagine a straight line coming out of the front of the ship as well as the flat wall you have boxed, I see the lines. Or quite pointing in the same direction. The second level line looks to me like it would be point a little to the left based upon the direction that second level cube’s side is facing.

            Is that making any sense?

            Everything else looks correct to me.

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              von_Nimmermehr @KevinTreaccar last edited by

              @KevinTreaccar

              i dont think so, it fits perfectly into my grid i worked with.
              Maybe i made something wrong thoug?

              But i was more talking of the raling in the back...i cant figure it out thoug and also i dont know what to do with the front of the "box". just a window (I don't like the window Idea, since there already is a window)? Or a door? how big should a door be? Or how hight, i am sitting on that part for so long now its ridiculous

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                von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                im getting closer to finish this peace....at least i didn't gibve up though.

                Have you any recommendations how i can push the values more? i seems its just all the same values or maybe thats something i can fix later?

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                  Asyas_illos @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                  @von_Nimmermehr oh wow I love how the tree looks like waves!

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                    A Former User @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                    @von_Nimmermehr I love the concept and the drawing is very lovely.

                    Have you tried to lighten the value of the tree leaves/waves? That might make the boat pop more for the viewer.

                    Such a lovely piece, excited to see where you take it.

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                    • von_Nimmermehr
                      von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                      Thanks @Asyas_illos i really fell in love with this idea and im happy i got it to work though.

                      @Stephanie-H i made the colors of the leaves a bit brighter, also i changes the color to a liiiiittle bit more saturated.

                      i think i'm about to finish it. I will sleep over it and take a look at it tomottow again with some fresh eyes.

                      Do you think it's a portfolio piece? It would be my very first portfolio piece. for now i'm quite happy, i finished it or at least am about to 😃

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                        Mara Price @Guest last edited by

                        @Stephanie-H It's beautiful

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                            von_Nimmermehr @Guest last edited by

                            @Stephanie-H love the Idea, havent thought of it but would look cute and cozy i guess. Thanks

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