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    • von_Nimmermehr
      von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

      So, after qritique arena, and seeing other people just having kind of the same idea as me (no hard feelings, i guess it was kind of obvious) I wanted to give it another try.

      I kind of liked the ship idea and i thougt it could be nice to have a tree thats looks like waves.

      • Do you think i got the perspective right?
        I kind of struggeled here, because the form of the ship is kind of challenging for me.
      • would you say, the dynamic/flow is okay here.

      you can just draw over if you feel the need. I learn better visually.

      since the critique arena is over, it's just about finishing a portfolio piece, because i alsway quit...but i want to have some finished portfolio pieces by the end of the year.

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      Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
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        AngelinaKizz @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

        @von_Nimmermehr looks really great so far!!!

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          von_Nimmermehr @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @AngelinaKizz Thank you 🙂

          Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
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          • von_Nimmermehr
            von_Nimmermehr last edited by

            here is my progress so far, im really enjoying my progress here.

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            • von_Nimmermehr
              von_Nimmermehr last edited by

              can anyone help me out with the part of the ship i encircled?

              I don't know why i struggle so much with this part ô_o
              i tried it a few times now but it seems off to me

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              Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                KevinTreaccar @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                @von_Nimmermehr I think the top line of your ship’s elevated platform is too sloped.

                Basically, as I imagine a straight line coming out of the front of the ship as well as the flat wall you have boxed, I see the lines. Or quite pointing in the same direction. The second level line looks to me like it would be point a little to the left based upon the direction that second level cube’s side is facing.

                Is that making any sense?

                Everything else looks correct to me.

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                • von_Nimmermehr
                  von_Nimmermehr @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                  @KevinTreaccar

                  i dont think so, it fits perfectly into my grid i worked with.
                  Maybe i made something wrong thoug?

                  But i was more talking of the raling in the back...i cant figure it out thoug and also i dont know what to do with the front of the "box". just a window (I don't like the window Idea, since there already is a window)? Or a door? how big should a door be? Or how hight, i am sitting on that part for so long now its ridiculous

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                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                  • von_Nimmermehr
                    von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                    im getting closer to finish this peace....at least i didn't gibve up though.

                    Have you any recommendations how i can push the values more? i seems its just all the same values or maybe thats something i can fix later?

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                      @von_Nimmermehr oh wow I love how the tree looks like waves!

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                        A Former User @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                        @von_Nimmermehr I love the concept and the drawing is very lovely.

                        Have you tried to lighten the value of the tree leaves/waves? That might make the boat pop more for the viewer.

                        Such a lovely piece, excited to see where you take it.

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                        • von_Nimmermehr
                          von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                          Thanks @Asyas_illos i really fell in love with this idea and im happy i got it to work though.

                          @Stephanie-H i made the colors of the leaves a bit brighter, also i changes the color to a liiiiittle bit more saturated.

                          i think i'm about to finish it. I will sleep over it and take a look at it tomottow again with some fresh eyes.

                          Do you think it's a portfolio piece? It would be my very first portfolio piece. for now i'm quite happy, i finished it or at least am about to 😃

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                            Mara Price @Guest last edited by

                            @Stephanie-H It's beautiful

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                                von_Nimmermehr @Guest last edited by

                                @Stephanie-H love the Idea, havent thought of it but would look cute and cozy i guess. Thanks

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