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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Juleesa
      Juleesa @annastenger last edited by

      @annastenger thank you! The colors and shapes in your piece are so strong!

      https://juleesa.com

      https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

      https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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      • Juleesa
        Juleesa @Karen Hobart last edited by

        @Karen-Hobart thank you! I really like your character design, the girl mimics the shape of the spiders - so great!

        https://juleesa.com

        https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

        https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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        • Raphael Berthoud
          Raphael Berthoud @Victoria Slight last edited by

          @Victoria-Slight Wow! this is SO good. I love the PoV, it makes the piece absolutely unique and very interesting in terms of composition. just wow!

          https://www.raphaelberthoud.com/

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          • Enni Heikura
            Enni Heikura @Oana last edited by

            @Oana I also really like the story in your picture, very creative and fun!😍

            https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
            https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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            • Victoria Slight
              Victoria Slight @Raphael Berthoud last edited by

              @Raphael-Berthoud Thank you!! I had so much fun while working on this drawing. I tried out a few different perspectives but landed on this one so that I could show off the rooftop garden more!

              https://www.victoriaslight.ca

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              • Rebecca J. Gomez
                Rebecca J. Gomez @Raphael Berthoud last edited by

                @Raphael-Berthoud Haha, I also did a Hansel and Gretel interpretation! Though my approach was different. This is fun!

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                • Rebecca J. Gomez
                  Rebecca J. Gomez @Oana last edited by

                  @Oana I love this. It's clever how you worked the three chairs in. And it looks like Mama Bear isn't particularly thrilled about this arrangement, which made me laugh.

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                  • Rebecca J. Gomez
                    Rebecca J. Gomez @Karen Hobart last edited by

                    @Karen-Hobart So fun and clever. I love the buggy look of the truck.

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                    • Rebecca J. Gomez
                      Rebecca J. Gomez @B-rex last edited by

                      @B-rex "Birria 51"- That's funny!

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                      • Shawna Calder Tenney
                        Shawna Calder Tenney last edited by

                        1- Food Truck Final copy.jpg

                        Gourmet Flies!

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                        • Kristen Lango
                          Kristen Lango @Shawna Calder Tenney last edited by

                          @Shawna-Calder-Tenney This is absolutely great Shawna!! You really nailed it! 😊

                          https://www.kristenlango.com/
                          https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                          • Oana
                            Oana @Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                            @Rebecca-J-Gomez Thank you! That's my favourite part too. After finishing the image I realised I could have gone one notch higher in that drama by having mama bear holding a bigger spoon in a stance suggesting she is ready to use it on the wolf's head. But the more understated approach seems to work too, glad you noticed it 🙂

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                            • Raphael Berthoud
                              Raphael Berthoud @Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                              @Rebecca-J-Gomez haha I see! I love it, well done!

                              https://www.raphaelberthoud.com/

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                              • Ivana Ševčík Miklošková
                                Ivana Ševčík Miklošková @Ivana Ševčík Miklošková last edited by

                                @Ivana-Ševčík-Miklošková said in July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art:

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                                Hi guys, my first picture uploaded here ☺️
                                My food truck is placed in North pole, where is person starving to death trying to get somewhere close to civilization and suddenly he sees the food truck 😳 (made from old shipwreck) guess polar bear likes this place too, but he is confused, cause there is bear hand hanging …

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                                • Shawna Calder Tenney
                                  Shawna Calder Tenney @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                  @Kristen-Lango thank you! 😃

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                                  • Katherine
                                    Katherine @Jason Crowley last edited by

                                    @Jason-Crowley I love this and would insta-buy this children's book.

                                    the site: katherinetyson.com
                                    instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                                    • Katherine
                                      Katherine @lizardillo last edited by

                                      @lizardillo I love it! Love all the little details on the "food truck".

                                      the site: katherinetyson.com
                                      instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                                      • Jason Crowley
                                        Jason Crowley @Katherine last edited by

                                        @Katherine Thanks!

                                        https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                                        https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                                        • lizardillo
                                          lizardillo @Katherine last edited by lizardillo

                                          @Katherine Thank you. I really enjoyed adding all the details. I'm not sure if it's valid as it's old, but when Lee said 'bird house food truck' I couldn't resist. Although it would be great to get a critique as I'm sure there are many things I could improve on.

                                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                          • Larue
                                            Larue @Karen Hobart last edited by

                                            @Karen-Hobart
                                            Love this! Beautifully rendered and fantastic concept and design.

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