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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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      Eva Hunter last edited by

      The Ramen & Co family run food truck: Is good sushi worth all the drama???

      (This is my first time submitting - any advice is apreciated :)) )

      Eva Hunter .JPG

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      • Jason Crowley
        Jason Crowley @Larue last edited by

        @Larue You are too kind! Thank you 🙂

        https://www.jasoncrowley.art
        https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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        • Victoria Slight
          Victoria Slight last edited by

          Here is my submission for July(and my first How to Fix your Art submission!) I loved this prompt and am looking forward to doing more!

          Victoria-Slight-JulySVS.jpg

          https://www.victoriaslight.ca

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          • Sunniva
            Sunniva @annastenger last edited by

            @annastenger Thank you ☺ I totally see what you mean! I think making parts of the shadows darker would give more definition and get me a bit closer to that elusive finished feeling 😅

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            • Enni Heikura
              Enni Heikura @Oana last edited by

              @Oana Oh thank you so much! I'm glad you noticed all the details! 😄

              https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
              https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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              • Rebecca J. Gomez
                Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                First time sharing! Here's my Witch's Treat Truck. This was done with a hand carved linoleum block that was printed, then scanned and painted with Procreate.

                Rebecca Gomez Witch's_Treat_Truck copy.jpeg

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                • Juleesa
                  Juleesa @Sara_C last edited by

                  @Sara_C thank you so much!

                  https://juleesa.com

                  https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

                  https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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                  • Juleesa
                    Juleesa @annastenger last edited by

                    @annastenger thank you! The colors and shapes in your piece are so strong!

                    https://juleesa.com

                    https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

                    https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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                    • Juleesa
                      Juleesa @Karen Hobart last edited by

                      @Karen-Hobart thank you! I really like your character design, the girl mimics the shape of the spiders - so great!

                      https://juleesa.com

                      https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

                      https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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                      • Raphael Berthoud
                        Raphael Berthoud @Victoria Slight last edited by

                        @Victoria-Slight Wow! this is SO good. I love the PoV, it makes the piece absolutely unique and very interesting in terms of composition. just wow!

                        https://www.raphaelberthoud.com/

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                        • Enni Heikura
                          Enni Heikura @Oana last edited by

                          @Oana I also really like the story in your picture, very creative and fun!😍

                          https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                          https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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                          • Victoria Slight
                            Victoria Slight @Raphael Berthoud last edited by

                            @Raphael-Berthoud Thank you!! I had so much fun while working on this drawing. I tried out a few different perspectives but landed on this one so that I could show off the rooftop garden more!

                            https://www.victoriaslight.ca

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                            • Rebecca J. Gomez
                              Rebecca J. Gomez @Raphael Berthoud last edited by

                              @Raphael-Berthoud Haha, I also did a Hansel and Gretel interpretation! Though my approach was different. This is fun!

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                              • Rebecca J. Gomez
                                Rebecca J. Gomez @Oana last edited by

                                @Oana I love this. It's clever how you worked the three chairs in. And it looks like Mama Bear isn't particularly thrilled about this arrangement, which made me laugh.

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                                • Rebecca J. Gomez
                                  Rebecca J. Gomez @Karen Hobart last edited by

                                  @Karen-Hobart So fun and clever. I love the buggy look of the truck.

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                                  • Rebecca J. Gomez
                                    Rebecca J. Gomez @B-rex last edited by

                                    @B-rex "Birria 51"- That's funny!

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                                    • Shawna Calder Tenney
                                      Shawna Calder Tenney last edited by

                                      1- Food Truck Final copy.jpg

                                      Gourmet Flies!

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                                      • Kristen Lango
                                        Kristen Lango @Shawna Calder Tenney last edited by

                                        @Shawna-Calder-Tenney This is absolutely great Shawna!! You really nailed it! 😊

                                        https://www.kristenlango.com/
                                        https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                                        • Oana
                                          Oana @Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                                          @Rebecca-J-Gomez Thank you! That's my favourite part too. After finishing the image I realised I could have gone one notch higher in that drama by having mama bear holding a bigger spoon in a stance suggesting she is ready to use it on the wolf's head. But the more understated approach seems to work too, glad you noticed it 🙂

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                                          • Raphael Berthoud
                                            Raphael Berthoud @Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                                            @Rebecca-J-Gomez haha I see! I love it, well done!

                                            https://www.raphaelberthoud.com/

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