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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Juleesa
      Juleesa @Karen Hobart last edited by

      @Karen-Hobart thank you! I really like your character design, the girl mimics the shape of the spiders - so great!

      https://juleesa.com

      https://emiliascorte.carrd.co/

      https://www.instagram.com/juleesa/

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      • Raphael Berthoud
        Raphael Berthoud @Victoria Slight last edited by

        @Victoria-Slight Wow! this is SO good. I love the PoV, it makes the piece absolutely unique and very interesting in terms of composition. just wow!

        https://www.raphaelberthoud.com/

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        • Enni Heikura
          Enni Heikura @Oana last edited by

          @Oana I also really like the story in your picture, very creative and fun!😍

          https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
          https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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          • Victoria Slight
            Victoria Slight @Raphael Berthoud last edited by

            @Raphael-Berthoud Thank you!! I had so much fun while working on this drawing. I tried out a few different perspectives but landed on this one so that I could show off the rooftop garden more!

            https://www.victoriaslight.ca

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            • Rebecca J. Gomez
              Rebecca J. Gomez @Raphael Berthoud last edited by

              @Raphael-Berthoud Haha, I also did a Hansel and Gretel interpretation! Though my approach was different. This is fun!

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              • Rebecca J. Gomez
                Rebecca J. Gomez @Oana last edited by

                @Oana I love this. It's clever how you worked the three chairs in. And it looks like Mama Bear isn't particularly thrilled about this arrangement, which made me laugh.

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                • Rebecca J. Gomez
                  Rebecca J. Gomez @Karen Hobart last edited by

                  @Karen-Hobart So fun and clever. I love the buggy look of the truck.

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                  • Rebecca J. Gomez
                    Rebecca J. Gomez @B-rex last edited by

                    @B-rex "Birria 51"- That's funny!

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                    • Shawna Calder Tenney
                      Shawna Calder Tenney last edited by

                      1- Food Truck Final copy.jpg

                      Gourmet Flies!

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                      • Kristen Lango
                        Kristen Lango @Shawna Calder Tenney last edited by

                        @Shawna-Calder-Tenney This is absolutely great Shawna!! You really nailed it! 😊

                        https://www.kristenlango.com/
                        https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                        • Oana
                          Oana @Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                          @Rebecca-J-Gomez Thank you! That's my favourite part too. After finishing the image I realised I could have gone one notch higher in that drama by having mama bear holding a bigger spoon in a stance suggesting she is ready to use it on the wolf's head. But the more understated approach seems to work too, glad you noticed it 🙂

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                          • Raphael Berthoud
                            Raphael Berthoud @Rebecca J. Gomez last edited by

                            @Rebecca-J-Gomez haha I see! I love it, well done!

                            https://www.raphaelberthoud.com/

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                            • Ivana Ševčík Miklošková
                              Ivana Ševčík Miklošková @Ivana Ševčík Miklošková last edited by

                              @Ivana-Ševčík-Miklošková said in July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art:

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                              Hi guys, my first picture uploaded here ☺️
                              My food truck is placed in North pole, where is person starving to death trying to get somewhere close to civilization and suddenly he sees the food truck 😳 (made from old shipwreck) guess polar bear likes this place too, but he is confused, cause there is bear hand hanging …

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                              • Shawna Calder Tenney
                                Shawna Calder Tenney @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                @Kristen-Lango thank you! 😃

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                                • Katherine
                                  Katherine @Jason Crowley last edited by

                                  @Jason-Crowley I love this and would insta-buy this children's book.

                                  the site: katherinetyson.com
                                  instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                                  • Katherine
                                    Katherine @lizardillo last edited by

                                    @lizardillo I love it! Love all the little details on the "food truck".

                                    the site: katherinetyson.com
                                    instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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                                    • Jason Crowley
                                      Jason Crowley @Katherine last edited by

                                      @Katherine Thanks!

                                      https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                                      https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                                      • lizardillo
                                        lizardillo @Katherine last edited by lizardillo

                                        @Katherine Thank you. I really enjoyed adding all the details. I'm not sure if it's valid as it's old, but when Lee said 'bird house food truck' I couldn't resist. Although it would be great to get a critique as I'm sure there are many things I could improve on.

                                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                        • Larue
                                          Larue @Karen Hobart last edited by

                                          @Karen-Hobart
                                          Love this! Beautifully rendered and fantastic concept and design.

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                                          • T
                                            tiffatsea last edited by

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                                            I know this is late, so if it doesn't make the cut, I understand. I felt like I would regret not submitting it. I really loved everyone's creativity for this prompt - Looking forward to 3rd Thursday!

                                            Instagram: @cityatsea.co

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