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    • Chip Valecek
      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

      I like #1, reminds me of Tom and Jerry just seeing the legs.


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      • WithLinesOfInk
        WithLinesOfInk last edited by

        like 1 best. All of the focus is on our little chef, and his personal story. the second option feels like there could be retribution and muddies up the message a bit. What a fun idea!

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        • TessaW
          TessaW last edited by

          I vote #1 as well.

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          • stringfellowart
            stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

            I agree #1.

            Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
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            • bnewman
              bnewman last edited by

              Number 1. Can't wait to see this one!

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                @evilrobot Looking good! my vote is for number one also but maybe with number two's head - i'm having trouble with the scale of the milk jug in relation to the boy and in relation to the woman in number one though...maybe go with a carton instead? hope you don't mind me mucking about on your drawing - here is a quick cut and paste of what i was thinking 🙂

                0_1500185953596_Untitled_Artwork-20.png

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                • DOTTYP
                  DOTTYP last edited by

                  Another vote for number 1. so cute!!

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                  • Jose Ramos
                    Jose Ramos last edited by

                    Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up. 😉

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                    • Kevin Longueil
                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                      Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this 🙂

                      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
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                      • evilrobot
                        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                        Thanks for all the comments and for the advise 🙂 Here's the line drawing I came up with. 0_1500441572588_finished-line.jpg

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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                          @evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.

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                          • TessaW
                            TessaW last edited by

                            Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.

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                            Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                            • RobinSlee
                              RobinSlee last edited by

                              Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?

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                              • bnewman
                                bnewman @evilrobot last edited by

                                @evilrobot Superb. Color?

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                                • NoWayMe
                                  NoWayMe last edited by

                                  Super!!! I love it! 🙂

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                                  • Jose Ramos
                                    Jose Ramos last edited by

                                    I like it. 😉

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