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    • WithLinesOfInk
      WithLinesOfInk last edited by

      like 1 best. All of the focus is on our little chef, and his personal story. the second option feels like there could be retribution and muddies up the message a bit. What a fun idea!

      http://Www.lauraslaterillustrations.com
      https://www.instagram.com/withlinesofink/
      http://lauraslatersketches.tumblr.com/

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      • TessaW
        TessaW last edited by

        I vote #1 as well.

        Website: www.tessawrathall.com

        Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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        • stringfellowart
          stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

          I agree #1.

          Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
          www.stringfellowart.com
          www.instagram/stringfellowart

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          • bnewman
            bnewman last edited by

            Number 1. Can't wait to see this one!

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

              @evilrobot Looking good! my vote is for number one also but maybe with number two's head - i'm having trouble with the scale of the milk jug in relation to the boy and in relation to the woman in number one though...maybe go with a carton instead? hope you don't mind me mucking about on your drawing - here is a quick cut and paste of what i was thinking 🙂

              0_1500185953596_Untitled_Artwork-20.png

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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              • DOTTYP
                DOTTYP last edited by

                Another vote for number 1. so cute!!

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                • Jose Ramos
                  Jose Ramos last edited by

                  Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up. 😉

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                  • Kevin Longueil
                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                    Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this 🙂

                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                    • evilrobot
                      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                      Thanks for all the comments and for the advise 🙂 Here's the line drawing I came up with. 0_1500441572588_finished-line.jpg

                      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                        @evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.

                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                        • TessaW
                          TessaW last edited by

                          Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.

                          Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                          • RobinSlee
                            RobinSlee last edited by

                            Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?

                            Site: Idrawcreatures.com
                            Shop: RobinSleeDesigns.etsy.com

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                            • bnewman
                              bnewman @evilrobot last edited by

                              @evilrobot Superb. Color?

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                              • NoWayMe
                                NoWayMe last edited by

                                Super!!! I love it! 🙂

                                noemiegionetlandry.squarespace.com
                                noemie_illustration on Instagram

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                                • Jose Ramos
                                  Jose Ramos last edited by

                                  I like it. 😉

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