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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

      @evilrobot Looking good! my vote is for number one also but maybe with number two's head - i'm having trouble with the scale of the milk jug in relation to the boy and in relation to the woman in number one though...maybe go with a carton instead? hope you don't mind me mucking about on your drawing - here is a quick cut and paste of what i was thinking 🙂

      0_1500185953596_Untitled_Artwork-20.png

      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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      • DOTTYP
        DOTTYP last edited by

        Another vote for number 1. so cute!!

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        • Jose Ramos
          Jose Ramos last edited by

          Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up. 😉

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          • Kevin Longueil
            Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

            Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this 🙂

            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
            https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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            • evilrobot
              evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

              Thanks for all the comments and for the advise 🙂 Here's the line drawing I came up with. 0_1500441572588_finished-line.jpg

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                @evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.

                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                • TessaW
                  TessaW last edited by

                  Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.

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                  Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                  • RobinSlee
                    RobinSlee last edited by

                    Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?

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                    • bnewman
                      bnewman @evilrobot last edited by

                      @evilrobot Superb. Color?

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                      • NoWayMe
                        NoWayMe last edited by

                        Super!!! I love it! 🙂

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                        • Jose Ramos
                          Jose Ramos last edited by

                          I like it. 😉

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