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    • TessaW
      TessaW last edited by

      I vote #1 as well.

      Website: www.tessawrathall.com

      Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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      • stringfellowart
        stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

        I agree #1.

        Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
        www.stringfellowart.com
        www.instagram/stringfellowart

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        • bnewman
          bnewman last edited by

          Number 1. Can't wait to see this one!

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          • Kevin Longueil
            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

            @evilrobot Looking good! my vote is for number one also but maybe with number two's head - i'm having trouble with the scale of the milk jug in relation to the boy and in relation to the woman in number one though...maybe go with a carton instead? hope you don't mind me mucking about on your drawing - here is a quick cut and paste of what i was thinking 🙂

            0_1500185953596_Untitled_Artwork-20.png

            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
            https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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            • DOTTYP
              DOTTYP last edited by

              Another vote for number 1. so cute!!

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              • Jose Ramos
                Jose Ramos last edited by

                Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up. 😉

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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                  Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this 🙂

                  Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                  • evilrobot
                    evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                    Thanks for all the comments and for the advise 🙂 Here's the line drawing I came up with. 0_1500441572588_finished-line.jpg

                    http://www.palacioillustration.com/

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                    https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                    • Kevin Longueil
                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                      @evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.

                      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                      • TessaW
                        TessaW last edited by

                        Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.

                        Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                        • RobinSlee
                          RobinSlee last edited by

                          Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?

                          Site: Idrawcreatures.com
                          Shop: RobinSleeDesigns.etsy.com

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                          • bnewman
                            bnewman @evilrobot last edited by

                            @evilrobot Superb. Color?

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                            • NoWayMe
                              NoWayMe last edited by

                              Super!!! I love it! 🙂

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                              noemie_illustration on Instagram

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                              • Jose Ramos
                                Jose Ramos last edited by

                                I like it. 😉

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