Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    "BIG" - WIP - Suggestions?

    Artwork
    8
    21
    1197
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • avfarrar
      avfarrar last edited by

      Alright! So, here is my progress.

      I just finished the inks stage. I am about to move on to shading, which will then be followed by color. Yay! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes: Let me know what you think.
      Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_inks_1262019.jpg

      There is beauty in life!

      WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
      www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

      ThisKateCreates 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 9
      • ThisKateCreates
        ThisKateCreates @avfarrar last edited by

        @avfarrar
        You kind of did what I meant already.
        6968bd32-921d-4d3c-84f4-c7713214a3ee-image.png

        It looked like you might ink the tail right along the page edge as in red. I was saying imagine it extending out as in black.

        Really excited to see your piece! It gave me a laugh.

        https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

        avfarrar 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
        • avfarrar
          avfarrar @ThisKateCreates last edited by

          @ThisKateCreates Ah. Thank you!

          There is beauty in life!

          WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
          www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • ?
            A Former User last edited by

            Your characters are so cute, the dragon's expression is brilliant, it's made me chuckle haha! Look forward to seeing this in colour!

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
            • avfarrar
              avfarrar last edited by avfarrar

              Here is my current progress. Shading is pretty much complete. Also, I changed the dragon's face to match the original sketch better. I will probably fix up the rest of the quirks in the color stage. 🙂

              Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_black_and_white_shading_1282019.jpg

              There is beauty in life!

              WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
              www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

              Nyrryl  Cadiz 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 8
              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

                I love your shading and linework. Great job!

                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

                avfarrar 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                • avfarrar
                  avfarrar @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                  @nyrrylcadiz Thank you! I am trying something new, where I do the shading first and then add color. We'll see how it turns out. 🙂

                  There is beauty in life!

                  WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                  www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

                  Nyrryl  Cadiz djly 2 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 0
                  • Justin Moss
                    Justin Moss last edited by

                    I really like the direction you are heading.

                    I would suggest pushing your darker values. This could really help the focal point. The line width is great. It does a wonderful job of leading the eye around the piece. Along with the shape language you are using.

                    Keep up the good work!

                    Justin Moss
                    JMossCreations
                    https://cara.app/jmosscreations
                    www.instagram.com/jmosscreations

                    avfarrar 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                    • avfarrar
                      avfarrar @Justin Moss last edited by

                      @Justin-Moss Thanks for the feedback! Yes I agree that it needs to be darker. Trying to figure out how to do that without losing the dragon's expression--changing into something else... 🤔

                      There is beauty in life!

                      WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                      www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

                        @avfarrar you’re work is already looking great. I can’t wait for the final version.

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                        • avfarrar
                          avfarrar last edited by

                          Here is my final piece! Just submitted it in the contest. Yaay!

                          Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_v2_1252019.jpg

                          There is beauty in life!

                          WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                          www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

                          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
                          • theprairiefox
                            theprairiefox last edited by

                            @avfarrar I love the expression on the dragon.

                            -The Prairie Fox
                            https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
                            https://www.theprairiefox.com

                            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                            • djly
                              djly @avfarrar last edited by

                              @avfarrar did you like coloring using the "shading first" method?

                              Thanks for posting your work. I love the final piece. I'm new to the world of illustration and so inspiring to see work like yours.

                              avfarrar 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                              • avfarrar
                                avfarrar @djly last edited by

                                @djly Thanks! I appreciate that. God bless your journey in art!
                                To answer you're question, I think that I did like the shading first method. This picture was done in Photoshop, so doing the "shading-first" method made it easier to do quick changes on the shading even while working on the color, because they were on separate layers.

                                There is beauty in life!

                                WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                                www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

                                djly 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                                • djly
                                  djly @avfarrar last edited by

                                  @avfarrar thank you for the kind words. And good to know about the "shading first" method - thank you for answering my question. Much appreciated!

                                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                  • First post
                                    Last post