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    "BIG" - WIP - Suggestions?

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      A Former User last edited by

      Your characters are so cute, the dragon's expression is brilliant, it's made me chuckle haha! Look forward to seeing this in colour!

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      • avfarrar
        avfarrar last edited by avfarrar

        Here is my current progress. Shading is pretty much complete. Also, I changed the dragon's face to match the original sketch better. I will probably fix up the rest of the quirks in the color stage. 🙂

        Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_black_and_white_shading_1282019.jpg

        There is beauty in life!

        WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
        www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

          I love your shading and linework. Great job!

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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          • avfarrar
            avfarrar @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

            @nyrrylcadiz Thank you! I am trying something new, where I do the shading first and then add color. We'll see how it turns out. 🙂

            There is beauty in life!

            WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
            www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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            • Justin Moss
              Justin Moss last edited by

              I really like the direction you are heading.

              I would suggest pushing your darker values. This could really help the focal point. The line width is great. It does a wonderful job of leading the eye around the piece. Along with the shape language you are using.

              Keep up the good work!

              Justin Moss
              JMossCreations
              https://cara.app/jmosscreations
              www.instagram.com/jmosscreations

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              • avfarrar
                avfarrar @Justin Moss last edited by

                @Justin-Moss Thanks for the feedback! Yes I agree that it needs to be darker. Trying to figure out how to do that without losing the dragon's expression--changing into something else... 🤔

                There is beauty in life!

                WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

                  @avfarrar you’re work is already looking great. I can’t wait for the final version.

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • avfarrar
                    avfarrar last edited by

                    Here is my final piece! Just submitted it in the contest. Yaay!

                    Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_v2_1252019.jpg

                    There is beauty in life!

                    WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                    www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                    • theprairiefox
                      theprairiefox last edited by

                      @avfarrar I love the expression on the dragon.

                      -The Prairie Fox
                      https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
                      https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                      • djly
                        djly @avfarrar last edited by

                        @avfarrar did you like coloring using the "shading first" method?

                        Thanks for posting your work. I love the final piece. I'm new to the world of illustration and so inspiring to see work like yours.

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                        • avfarrar
                          avfarrar @djly last edited by

                          @djly Thanks! I appreciate that. God bless your journey in art!
                          To answer you're question, I think that I did like the shading first method. This picture was done in Photoshop, so doing the "shading-first" method made it easier to do quick changes on the shading even while working on the color, because they were on separate layers.

                          There is beauty in life!

                          WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                          www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                          • djly
                            djly @avfarrar last edited by

                            @avfarrar thank you for the kind words. And good to know about the "shading first" method - thank you for answering my question. Much appreciated!

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