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    • avfarrar
      avfarrar @ThisKateCreates last edited by

      @ThisKateCreates Ah. Thank you!

      There is beauty in life!

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        A Former User last edited by

        Your characters are so cute, the dragon's expression is brilliant, it's made me chuckle haha! Look forward to seeing this in colour!

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        • avfarrar
          avfarrar last edited by avfarrar

          Here is my current progress. Shading is pretty much complete. Also, I changed the dragon's face to match the original sketch better. I will probably fix up the rest of the quirks in the color stage. 🙂

          Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_black_and_white_shading_1282019.jpg

          There is beauty in life!

          WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
          www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

            I love your shading and linework. Great job!

            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
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            • avfarrar
              avfarrar @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @nyrrylcadiz Thank you! I am trying something new, where I do the shading first and then add color. We'll see how it turns out. 🙂

              There is beauty in life!

              WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
              www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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              • Justin Moss
                Justin Moss last edited by

                I really like the direction you are heading.

                I would suggest pushing your darker values. This could really help the focal point. The line width is great. It does a wonderful job of leading the eye around the piece. Along with the shape language you are using.

                Keep up the good work!

                Justin Moss
                JMossCreations
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                www.instagram.com/jmosscreations

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                • avfarrar
                  avfarrar @Justin Moss last edited by

                  @Justin-Moss Thanks for the feedback! Yes I agree that it needs to be darker. Trying to figure out how to do that without losing the dragon's expression--changing into something else... 🤔

                  There is beauty in life!

                  WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                  www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

                    @avfarrar you’re work is already looking great. I can’t wait for the final version.

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                    • avfarrar
                      avfarrar last edited by

                      Here is my final piece! Just submitted it in the contest. Yaay!

                      Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_v2_1252019.jpg

                      There is beauty in life!

                      WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                      www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                      • theprairiefox
                        theprairiefox last edited by

                        @avfarrar I love the expression on the dragon.

                        -The Prairie Fox
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                        • djly
                          djly @avfarrar last edited by

                          @avfarrar did you like coloring using the "shading first" method?

                          Thanks for posting your work. I love the final piece. I'm new to the world of illustration and so inspiring to see work like yours.

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                          • avfarrar
                            avfarrar @djly last edited by

                            @djly Thanks! I appreciate that. God bless your journey in art!
                            To answer you're question, I think that I did like the shading first method. This picture was done in Photoshop, so doing the "shading-first" method made it easier to do quick changes on the shading even while working on the color, because they were on separate layers.

                            There is beauty in life!

                            WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                            www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                            • djly
                              djly @avfarrar last edited by

                              @avfarrar thank you for the kind words. And good to know about the "shading first" method - thank you for answering my question. Much appreciated!

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