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    • avfarrar
      avfarrar last edited by avfarrar

      Here is my current progress. Shading is pretty much complete. Also, I changed the dragon's face to match the original sketch better. I will probably fix up the rest of the quirks in the color stage. 🙂

      Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_black_and_white_shading_1282019.jpg

      There is beauty in life!

      WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
      www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

        I love your shading and linework. Great job!

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • avfarrar
          avfarrar @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @nyrrylcadiz Thank you! I am trying something new, where I do the shading first and then add color. We'll see how it turns out. 🙂

          There is beauty in life!

          WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
          www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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          • Justin Moss
            Justin Moss last edited by

            I really like the direction you are heading.

            I would suggest pushing your darker values. This could really help the focal point. The line width is great. It does a wonderful job of leading the eye around the piece. Along with the shape language you are using.

            Keep up the good work!

            Justin Moss
            JMossCreations
            https://cara.app/jmosscreations
            www.instagram.com/jmosscreations

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            • avfarrar
              avfarrar @Justin Moss last edited by

              @Justin-Moss Thanks for the feedback! Yes I agree that it needs to be darker. Trying to figure out how to do that without losing the dragon's expression--changing into something else... 🤔

              There is beauty in life!

              WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
              www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

                @avfarrar you’re work is already looking great. I can’t wait for the final version.

                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • avfarrar
                  avfarrar last edited by

                  Here is my final piece! Just submitted it in the contest. Yaay!

                  Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_v2_1252019.jpg

                  There is beauty in life!

                  WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                  www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                  • theprairiefox
                    theprairiefox last edited by

                    @avfarrar I love the expression on the dragon.

                    -The Prairie Fox
                    https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
                    https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                    • djly
                      djly @avfarrar last edited by

                      @avfarrar did you like coloring using the "shading first" method?

                      Thanks for posting your work. I love the final piece. I'm new to the world of illustration and so inspiring to see work like yours.

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                      • avfarrar
                        avfarrar @djly last edited by

                        @djly Thanks! I appreciate that. God bless your journey in art!
                        To answer you're question, I think that I did like the shading first method. This picture was done in Photoshop, so doing the "shading-first" method made it easier to do quick changes on the shading even while working on the color, because they were on separate layers.

                        There is beauty in life!

                        WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                        www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                        • djly
                          djly @avfarrar last edited by

                          @avfarrar thank you for the kind words. And good to know about the "shading first" method - thank you for answering my question. Much appreciated!

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