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    • Sarah LuAnn
      Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

      They all look so great! Another vote for the one with the mountain.

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      • burvantill
        burvantill Moderator last edited by

        These are all good idea's. I like the #3&4 the best. I would rework Gandolf's symbol though, right now it looks like a teacher stamped you're art with a big F ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜œ. The silhouettes are great ๐Ÿ‘. Looking forward to see this develop.

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        • Pamela Fraley
          Pamela Fraley SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Aleksey thank you! Thatโ€™s very helpful. โ˜บ๏ธ

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          • Pamela Fraley
            Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

            @Sarah-LuAnn thank you!

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            • Pamela Fraley
              Pamela Fraley SVS OG @burvantill last edited by

              @burvantill thank you! Yea. Iโ€™m going to rework all the lettering. Itโ€™ll be tricky with gandalfs symbol, because it looks like an โ€œfโ€ but hopefully it wonโ€™t look like I gave me self a bad grade. ๐Ÿ˜†

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              • braden H
                braden H @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                @Pamela-Fraley I don't think you're going too simple. I think 'too simple' is a pretty tough line to cross ๐Ÿ™‚

                My fav's are the first and second option, I think, though they're all good. I can see the finished cover being done in some kind of awesome sumi ink style. Something nice and 'rough'.

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                • Pamela Fraley
                  Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Pamela Fraley last edited by

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                  Hereโ€™s another version I made last night. Gahh! I donโ€™t know which one I like. The funny thing is that this is just all based on one of my thumbnails: I had about 3 or 4 more completely different concepts I wanted to explore.

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                  • burvantill
                    burvantill Moderator @Pamela Fraley last edited by burvantill

                    @Pamela-Fraley oooh. I like this one! I think you could make that dragon bigger to fill the space more. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ At second glance, the titles value is a tad too dark. I almost didnโ€™t catch it. But I do like this one the best.

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                    • theprairiefox
                      theprairiefox last edited by

                      I really like the mountain in the first one, but in the newest one the usage of black is really powerful.

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @Pamela Fraley last edited by

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                        I like the first one with the added mountain in the background ๐Ÿ™‚

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                        • ShannonB
                          ShannonB last edited by

                          They're all great but I'm really drawn to the one with the mountain too!

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                          • Elizabeth Rose
                            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                            Me like mountain one too ๐Ÿ™‚

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