Book Cover WIP Hobbit

burvantill

These are all good idea's. I like the #3&4 the best. I would rework Gandolf's symbol though, right now it looks like a teacher stamped you're art with a big F . The silhouettes are great . Looking forward to see this develop.

Pamela Fraley

@Aleksey thank you! That’s very helpful. ️

Pamela Fraley

@Sarah-LuAnn thank you!

Pamela Fraley

@burvantill thank you! Yea. I’m going to rework all the lettering. It’ll be tricky with gandalfs symbol, because it looks like an “f” but hopefully it won’t look like I gave me self a bad grade.

braden H

@Pamela-Fraley I don't think you're going too simple. I think 'too simple' is a pretty tough line to cross

My fav's are the first and second option, I think, though they're all good. I can see the finished cover being done in some kind of awesome sumi ink style. Something nice and 'rough'.

Pamela Fraley

Here’s another version I made last night. Gahh! I don’t know which one I like. The funny thing is that this is just all based on one of my thumbnails: I had about 3 or 4 more completely different concepts I wanted to explore.

burvantill

@Pamela-Fraley oooh. I like this one! I think you could make that dragon bigger to fill the space more. At second glance, the titles value is a tad too dark. I almost didn’t catch it. But I do like this one the best.

theprairiefox

I really like the mountain in the first one, but in the newest one the usage of black is really powerful.

Heather Boyd

@Pamela-Fraley
I like the first one with the added mountain in the background

ShannonB

They're all great but I'm really drawn to the one with the mountain too!

Elizabeth Rose

Me like mountain one too