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    • Justin Moss
      Justin Moss last edited by

      Great new composition!

      This composition creates a sense of depth. With the cooks "table" of supplies being in the foreground. You also have created a good path for our eye to follow with the stream. A lot is going on, but each thing does a good job of leading us around the piece.

      Also, Love the tree wine holder. Hilarious!

      I agree with what most are saying. Honestly, the bridge is next to the squirrels, so it is not throwing me off to much. Perhaps removing the railing. Or replacing it with rocks/stepping stones in the river. Just an idea.

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @Aleksey looking great

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey last edited by

          Ok heres the rough sketch the trees in the back aren’t gonna be dark. They’re gonna be silhouetted .
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          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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            A Former User @ArtofAleksey last edited by

            @Aleksey
            This is looking great! Love all the expressive details you added in this piece!

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            • BichonBistro
              BichonBistro @ArtofAleksey last edited by

              @Aleksey this is so funny! I admire your composition with so many elements working well together 👍🏻

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              • Erin.Cortese
                Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @Aleksey Looking great!! Losing the rails on the bridge was a good call, it draws less attention now. My eye wants to roam all over to discover every details!

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  Thanks ya’ll! Hopefully my colors look ok for this. My biggest challenge!

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    Ok heres the inked version
                    The background trees will be colored, im gonna remove the ink lines from them.
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                    • MichaelaH
                      MichaelaH last edited by

                      It is really a nice piece of work...I am looking forward to Your color version

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                      • Gary Wilkinson
                        Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        Such a fun concept and a lovely variety of characters, really looking forward to seeing it colored.

                        Just a slight crit, It will probably be more obvious to me when it's colored and values are added, but it took me a while to actually realise there was a human on the spit. I wouldn't worry about that until I see the later version though.

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                        • MikeCañas
                          MikeCañas last edited by

                          Hi @Aleksey , I really, really love this piece. Even though there is a lot going on I think it’s working well so far. I really love your line work as well. One thing I’m curious about is the bird whose beak has pierced through the menu. Does he have bad eyesight thus forcing him to look really closely and then breaking through the menu? If so, maybe you could make him squint his eyes? You could even have his glasses on his head to add a little humor to it? It’s just a small suggestion. I really can’t wait to see this with color! Great work!

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @MikeCañas last edited by

                            @MikeCañas no its more just a big beak joke.

                            Values! I have a weird way of doing values studies but it works for me when i color.

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                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              Colors and shadows! Gotta add drop shadows and highlights and then im done
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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey last edited by

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                                • Erin.Cortese
                                  Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by Erin.Cortese

                                  @Aleksey Looks incredible! Nice work.

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                    @Erin-Cortese thanks!

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                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                      @Aleksey This turned out really awesome! That chef seems confident. He's done this before...

                                      I wonder how many whole long pigs he needed to perfect his recipe.

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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett haha everything tastes great roasted and salted

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