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    • Leontine
      Leontine @Rich Green last edited by

      @Rich-Green WONDERFUL! I love it !

      Leontine
      "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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      • Rich Green
        Rich Green SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

        @Leontine Thank you so much!

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        • Rob Smith
          Rob Smith last edited by

          @Rich-Green Great job!

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          • Rich Green
            Rich Green SVS OG @Rob Smith last edited by

            @Rob-Smith Thank you Rob!!! Really appreciate that!

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            • Leontine
              Leontine last edited by

              I wanted to add that you are improving so quickly ! chapeau!

              Leontine
              "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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              • Dulcie
                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                Congratulations on your breakthrough 🙂 It is so satisfying to finally crack a problem especially when it's been hard to work out...I really like the rendering on your bear, with the variation in colour and the little fur details 🙂

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                • joanie stone
                  joanie stone last edited by

                  Great work. One little suggestion is to darken the occlusion shadows right where objects make contact with a surface, like under the bowls, honeybear and door. I love how you integrated the girl and great idea to draw-out some of her hair. Very nice work.

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                  • Rich Green
                    Rich Green SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                    @Dulcie thank you so much! And yes it sure does feel so satisfying to see changes and improvements beginning to happen! I love seeing those improvements from everyone who posts on these forums as well - so much motivation and inspiration out there!

                    www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                    • Rich Green
                      Rich Green SVS OG @joanie stone last edited by

                      @joanie-stone Thank you! Yes I see exactly what you mean - I did not make them dark enough to make the bowls feel like they are not slightly floating on the table. I will be sure to revisit that! Appreciate the input!

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                      • Lynn Larson
                        Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                        This is so wonderful Rich!! I agree, take care of those shadows, and you will have a truly stellar piece! I love all of the little details, like the Cubs hat and Da Bears tie, well done!

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                        • Charlie Eve Ryan
                          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          The bear expressions are great!

                          Happy Creating
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                          • Rich Green
                            Rich Green SVS OG @Lynn Larson last edited by

                            @Lynn-Larson Thanks so much - even though I did not draw him that way on purpose, I feel like the Dad bear is channeling his inner "Da Coach" Mike Ditka as well! HA!

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                            • Rich Green
                              Rich Green SVS OG @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

                              @Charlie-Eve-Ryan thanks so much - I really had fun working on them, I am thrilled you pointed them out!

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