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    • Rich Green
      Rich Green SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

      @Leontine Thank you so much!

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      • Rob Smith
        Rob Smith last edited by

        @Rich-Green Great job!

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        • Rich Green
          Rich Green SVS OG @Rob Smith last edited by

          @Rob-Smith Thank you Rob!!! Really appreciate that!

          www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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          • Leontine
            Leontine last edited by

            I wanted to add that you are improving so quickly ! chapeau!

            Leontine
            "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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            • Dulcie
              Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

              Congratulations on your breakthrough 🙂 It is so satisfying to finally crack a problem especially when it's been hard to work out...I really like the rendering on your bear, with the variation in colour and the little fur details 🙂

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              • joanie stone
                joanie stone last edited by

                Great work. One little suggestion is to darken the occlusion shadows right where objects make contact with a surface, like under the bowls, honeybear and door. I love how you integrated the girl and great idea to draw-out some of her hair. Very nice work.

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                • Rich Green
                  Rich Green SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                  @Dulcie thank you so much! And yes it sure does feel so satisfying to see changes and improvements beginning to happen! I love seeing those improvements from everyone who posts on these forums as well - so much motivation and inspiration out there!

                  www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                  • Rich Green
                    Rich Green SVS OG @joanie stone last edited by

                    @joanie-stone Thank you! Yes I see exactly what you mean - I did not make them dark enough to make the bowls feel like they are not slightly floating on the table. I will be sure to revisit that! Appreciate the input!

                    www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                    • Lynn Larson
                      Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                      This is so wonderful Rich!! I agree, take care of those shadows, and you will have a truly stellar piece! I love all of the little details, like the Cubs hat and Da Bears tie, well done!

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                      • Charlie Eve Ryan
                        Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        The bear expressions are great!

                        Happy Creating
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                        • Rich Green
                          Rich Green SVS OG @Lynn Larson last edited by

                          @Lynn-Larson Thanks so much - even though I did not draw him that way on purpose, I feel like the Dad bear is channeling his inner "Da Coach" Mike Ditka as well! HA!

                          www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                          • Rich Green
                            Rich Green SVS OG @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

                            @Charlie-Eve-Ryan thanks so much - I really had fun working on them, I am thrilled you pointed them out!

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