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    • Rob Smith
      Rob Smith last edited by

      @Rich-Green Great job!

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      • Rich Green
        Rich Green SVS OG @Rob Smith last edited by

        @Rob-Smith Thank you Rob!!! Really appreciate that!

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        • Leontine
          Leontine last edited by

          I wanted to add that you are improving so quickly ! chapeau!

          Leontine
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          • Dulcie
            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

            Congratulations on your breakthrough 🙂 It is so satisfying to finally crack a problem especially when it's been hard to work out...I really like the rendering on your bear, with the variation in colour and the little fur details 🙂

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            • joanie stone
              joanie stone last edited by

              Great work. One little suggestion is to darken the occlusion shadows right where objects make contact with a surface, like under the bowls, honeybear and door. I love how you integrated the girl and great idea to draw-out some of her hair. Very nice work.

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              • Rich Green
                Rich Green SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                @Dulcie thank you so much! And yes it sure does feel so satisfying to see changes and improvements beginning to happen! I love seeing those improvements from everyone who posts on these forums as well - so much motivation and inspiration out there!

                www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                • Rich Green
                  Rich Green SVS OG @joanie stone last edited by

                  @joanie-stone Thank you! Yes I see exactly what you mean - I did not make them dark enough to make the bowls feel like they are not slightly floating on the table. I will be sure to revisit that! Appreciate the input!

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                  • Lynn Larson
                    Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                    This is so wonderful Rich!! I agree, take care of those shadows, and you will have a truly stellar piece! I love all of the little details, like the Cubs hat and Da Bears tie, well done!

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                    • Charlie Eve Ryan
                      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      The bear expressions are great!

                      Happy Creating
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                      • Rich Green
                        Rich Green SVS OG @Lynn Larson last edited by

                        @Lynn-Larson Thanks so much - even though I did not draw him that way on purpose, I feel like the Dad bear is channeling his inner "Da Coach" Mike Ditka as well! HA!

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                        • Rich Green
                          Rich Green SVS OG @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

                          @Charlie-Eve-Ryan thanks so much - I really had fun working on them, I am thrilled you pointed them out!

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