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    September prompt WIP. Feedback always welcome :)

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      I decided this was a good candidate for a spread (and also, I don't have any spreads in my portfolio...) πŸ™‚

      Rough sketch, basic value study, and a couple of colour studies.

      I'm going with the one with the orange bus (it's closer to a real school bus colour and isn't so vibratey colour-wise.

      My plan with the colour choices (I wanted LOTS of colours.) is to start with red on the left, and then gradually go around the colour wheel with green on the right. Then we pop up to yellow for the bird cage and street sign and finally orange for the bus. And then in flows round and round (I hope πŸ™‚ )

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        And my goal for artistic development at the moment is work lighter and brighter in general. I have the bad habit of going dark and grey given half a chance πŸ™‚

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett this already looks great! I really like where you’re going with the color!

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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          • Coley
            Coley @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett wow it's already totally awesome

            https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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            • holleywilliamson
              holleywilliamson SVS OG @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett I love the contrast and dark!

              https://www.instagram.com/holleywilliamsonart/
              http://holleywilliamson.com

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                Sketch! So many kids! I fit in my webcomic characters and a few of the kids from my grade 5 practicum class πŸ™‚ Tryin' to push sizes and shapes!

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                • Chip Valecek
                  Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett looking great! So many lil people to paint. Love that shark in the tank LOL


                  https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                  https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                  http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                  • theprairiefox
                    theprairiefox last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett it is looking good. I love all the faces and expressions. Makes the piece stand out!

                    -The Prairie Fox
                    https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
                    https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      @Chip-Valecek @theprairiefox @holleywilliamson @Coley @Nyrryl-Cadiz

                      Thanks for the feedback everyone πŸ™‚

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        Phew! Ready for inks! I think I'm happy with the variety of kids and poses.

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                        • Erin.Cortese
                          Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett In loooove with this composition! It is so much fun!

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                          • Coley
                            Coley @braden H last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett yes this is totally awesome!

                            https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              @Erin-Cortese @Coley Thanks! πŸ˜ƒ I never know whether it's a good thing or a bad thing that no one's finding any problems :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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                              • braden H
                                braden H last edited by

                                Inking begins! SO MUCH INKING!

                                In fact so much colouring.

                                I'm hoping to have inks done tomorrow and then paint over the weekend πŸ™‚

                                If all else fails, I can turn it in as black and white :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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                                • KathrynAdebayo
                                  KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                  Braden, this is so funny and amazing! I’d double check the steering wheel lining up with the orientation of the bus. Can’t wait to see this progress... I could look at all the details for hours. πŸ™‚

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                    @KathrynAdebayo AHA!

                                    I knew there was somethin' buggin' me about the bus driver!

                                    I will totally fix that. Thank you πŸ˜ƒ

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                                    • Coley
                                      Coley @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett ha ha, it's a good thing! I'm totally entranced by it and can't stop looking at it πŸ™‚

                                      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                        Profile drawing! Great idea. I love that it’s also not in a classroom setting.

                                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                        alekseyillustration.com

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                          @Aleksey And the 'she' is not a student πŸ™‚

                                          I'm happier with the profile perspective than I thought I'd be. The right tool for the right job I guess πŸ™‚

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Coley last edited by

                                            @Coley well that's good, then πŸ™‚

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