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      A Former User last edited by A Former User

      Really fun idea! My gut instinct is to go with the black and white - the color you added is nice, but it's nothing I can't imagine from the black and white. The color isn't adding anything extra to the story, in other words, and the black and white also makes it look older, which works for the time period we get from his clothes.

      I am trying to redo my submission last minute, too. I'm so unhappy with it.

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by

        @chrisaakins the persons foot prints are taking away the visual interest of the trees tracks. Get rid of all those human prints and make the tree tracks more obvious.

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        • Jenna Jenks
          Jenna Jenks @chrisaakins last edited by

          @chrisaakins I love this! 😍 What a fantastic idea

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          • chrisaakins
            chrisaakins last edited by

            @Aleksey I would, but the tracks show that he was following the tree tracks but lost them because he doesn't yet realize the tree made them.
            @carolinedrawing thanks for the input. My students agree with you. I get nervous because no one ever submits black and white, but ink work is my strongest suit.
            @Jenna-Jenks thanks!

            Chris Akins
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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by

              @chrisaakins ok. My vote is for color then

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              • burvantill
                burvantill Moderator last edited by

                I like them both but I think I'll go with color, because it has a bit more contrast in the tree and the color helps the fact that the tree is about to take his hat, it stands out a bit more. I didn't notice it when looking at the black/white. lol. super idea. 👍

                Lisa Burvant
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                • Aaron_T
                  Aaron_T last edited by

                  I really like the way you've applied color in this...it has a colorized-black-and-white effect. I think it works with the topic. Nice work!

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    I vote color. Really beautiful piece.

                    Laurie DeMott
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                    • BichonBistro
                      BichonBistro @chrisaakins last edited by

                      @chrisaakins Black & White 👍🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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                      • DOTTYP
                        DOTTYP last edited by

                        I like the colour it is quite subtle anyway so the colour does not distract from your inking.it is a lovely piece of art

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                        • Laurel Aylesworth
                          Laurel Aylesworth last edited by

                          I love black and white, but if you go for color maybe have the guy in a different color than the tree?

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                          • xin li
                            xin li last edited by

                            I like the color. I would try a different color for the guy as well?

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                            • chrisaakins
                              chrisaakins last edited by

                              Thanks everyone. It seems most people like the color and a couple of you think I need to change will's outfit. What color? My gut says a greenish or a bluish color but maybe a burgundy or orange. Not sure whether to go analogous or complementary to the tree.

                              Chris Akins
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                              • Coley
                                Coley @chrisaakins last edited by

                                @chrisaakins I'd probably go complementary but if it's in Photoshop can't you change the hue and see what you like best? P.s. I like the colored version a little better than black and white but they're both great. Great drawing and concept!

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