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    little mouse in the wedding band - which do you prefer?

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    • NicolaSchofield
      NicolaSchofield @Coley last edited by

      @Coley I joined SVS during inktober and I remember this piece as one of the first things I saw on the forum. So cool that you're still evolving it. Perhaps an entry for the Nightfall February prompt?

      Nicola Schofield

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      • chrisaakins
        chrisaakins @NicolaSchofield last edited by

        @neschof what a great idea!

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        • baileyvidler
          baileyvidler @Coley last edited by

          @Coley I thought this image looked familiar, but I couldn't remember when I had seen it last! That's so cool this came from Inktober!

          My favorite is the top right, although, I'd be interested to see what it looks like with the saturation of the top left, but the values of the top right.

          Bailey Vidler
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          • Coley
            Coley @NicolaSchofield last edited by

            @neschof I might do that 🙂 thanks 😁

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

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              I did some rim lighting etc and did a fair amount of rendering to the little mousie's face as the lines were a bit harsh I thought. I wanted to see things a little more rendered. wondering people;s thoughts? Do you like it better with the lines or more rendered? I wonder if I need a few harder lines/pieces of fur if it has gotten too soft?

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              • Coley
                Coley last edited by

                oh I'm realizing I gave him a nose more like a dog than a mouse lol. back to reference!

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator @Coley last edited by

                  @Coley 👏👏👏😃

                  Lisa Burvant
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                  • Coley
                    Coley @burvantill last edited by

                    @burvantill thanks 🙂

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                    • Coley
                      Coley last edited by

                      More like a mouse nose but not sure I'm quite there yet. When to stop rendering, that is the question LoL

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                      • RG Spaulding
                        RG Spaulding @Coley last edited by

                        @Coley So beautiful. I love all the adjustments you have made. Yes, you should definitely enter the "Nightfall" contest.

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                        • Coley
                          Coley @RG Spaulding last edited by

                          @RG-Spaulding thank you 🙂

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                          • Coley
                            Coley last edited by Coley

                            I think I'm done so just dropping it here. 🙂 thanks for the feedback along the way peeps 🙂
                            littlemousest3sm.jpg

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                            • BichonBistro
                              BichonBistro @Coley last edited by

                              @Coley love how this turned out 🥰

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                              • Coley
                                Coley @BichonBistro last edited by

                                @BichonBistro thank you 🙂

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                                • MirkaH
                                  MirkaH last edited by

                                  i like the darkes one, but the colors seem a bit saturated in it. So maybe bring saturation down a bit, and then perhaps a a glimmer highlight around the front edge of the ring?

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                                  • demotlj
                                    demotlj SVS OG @Coley last edited by

                                    @Coley Are you entering this in the contest? You should -- it's such a peaceful beautiful painting.

                                    Laurie DeMott
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                                    • Coley
                                      Coley @demotlj last edited by

                                      @demotlj I think I will. I'm stalling because I may nitpick it a little more lol. Or not. Will see! I think perhaps I just have trouble entering something way before deadline as I typically enter at the last moment LoL!
                                      Thanks for the kind comment☺️

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