COVER ART for a book I am writing... Critique requested
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@chrisaakins Yataghan for the title - free.
Krasomila for the author name -free.
Can't wait to see what you come up with.
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Okay... Here is the final-ish version I think. Thanks to @burvantill @jwing @CLCanadyArts for your input. The font was exactly the one I was looking for. This was my first serious attempt at cover art, so I thank you for your patience. I learned a ton with your help. Let me know what you think, if you don't mind.
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@chrisaakins Great job
This looks very professional to me.Lisa Burvant
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@burvantill thanks Lisa!
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@chrisaakins Nice!
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Awesome (and very educational) to see the evolution of this. The final iteration looks great!
I hope the publisher likes stick figures!!
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All cover options for the book are beautiful. I think you should feel with your heart which one is the best.
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@CLCanadyArts That redo looks awesome. I think it would look really cool if the text was made to look like it was embedded/embossed into the leather of the book.
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The cover really came together after you workshopped it with the group, wow! The final version is eye-catching and mysterious. I love old maps and jewelry with potentially magical qualities... I would very much be arrested by this cover & want to learn more about the book. Outstanding work!
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Just reading this now. I think the cover has improved a whole lot since the beginning and now it looks quite nice! The only thing I'd do is possibly move the type up a hair. It has had the tendency to be too low all throughout the process. One of my art professors told me, in relation to mattes in frames but I think it also applies to type placement, that the bottom of a matte should always be a little thicker than the other sides, because the eye wants more weight at the bottom. Make sense?
