Feedback Welcomed - Sequential Work for my Website!

Michael Angelo Go

Okay after some outside feedback, I updated the piece to give the hollow room some more character.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@Michael-Angelo-Go hi. My one suggestion is that maybe the mom is bending over, hugging the girl.

Michael Angelo Go

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Okay here's an update. I've been slowing down these days. I need to listen to that burnout podcast.

I'm trying a new technique where I draw everything in grayscale then add in color later. I think this composition will be very strong if there is a clear figure-ground (black part and white part).

I started working on the dad. I think the values are okay at the moment. I'm sort of guessing the lighting of this scene already. Oh and I already changed the pose for Maganda and her nanay. I think they look closer than ever.

Michael Angelo Go

Ooh ooh @NessIllustration look at this!

Michael Angelo Go

Michael Angelo Go

NessIllustration

@Michael-Angelo-Go How pretty! This is a step above your other work, Michael! Try to add a bit more contrast to improve readability! For instance,the little girl's hair darker to distinguish it more from her hair. You could also move around the foliage in the window a little bit so the mom's head clearly pops out against the sky

Michael Angelo Go

@NessIllustration Oh I forgot to mention I'm not done. I'll add an update later today! I didn't add the fan as you can see.

Michael Angelo Go

@Nyrryl-Cadiz @NessIllustration

I just finished rendering the scene. I added some motion blur, but I'm worried it might be overkill. Should I add some blur, no blur, or only a little bit of in-between? Let me know what you all think!

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NessIllustration

@Michael-Angelo-Go I prefer without, it just looks nice and crisp This is probably my favorite piece of yours ever! I love the limited color palette and the emotions. I do think you could push your blacks a bit more black to make the contrast sharper though!