Feedback for a new illustration
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A lot of changed later... this is where I am right now with this piece, I hope very much I could improve some of the points that where difficult about the former version and that it read better now.
Would love to hear what you think.
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@Freya-Chakour Oh, this is a nice start. Could be a nice book cover.Really beautiful.
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in term of readability and composition i think its better than the previous one.
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@Freya-Chakour great job! The lighting is so lovely especially the willow
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@CLCanadyArts @HeatherBouteneff thank you so much for your feedback :3 it is greatly appreciated and helped me a lot to hang on to this piece and finish it! I will post the final in a moment (still need to do some test printing and sometimes after seeing the print I go back and change a few things here and there, but for now I am happy with the result)
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soo that's the final! it was definitely a challenging piece for me, but also I learned a ton. Thank you all again for your feedback!
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@Freya-Chakour This is gorgeous!! The textures and colors are magical.
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@Freya-Chakour
So beautiful, and makes me want to know more for sure. It was great to see your process and edits! -
@Freya-Chakour Amazing work! The colors are just perfect
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Awesome!
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It turned out so nice! Is the water nymph picking a bouquet for the elven girl?
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@Freya-Chakour you did such a fantastic job applying the feedback! It looks great
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@baileyvidler @KayPotter @Jacy13 @SheerArt @carlianne thank you so much for your kind words! I apprechimade your words, feedback and support a lot!
@CLCanadyArts Thank you so much! Yeah I imagined something like that, I also had this idea that they are living somewhere in a house half underwater, half above the sea level, in a kind of shared apartment situation, that I hope to explore in a future illustration : )
