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    A or B? Bunnies or no bunnies?

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    • avfarrar
      avfarrar @Melissa_Bailey last edited by avfarrar

      @Melissa-Bailey-0 @Braden-Hallett
      I agree. Maybe the value of the color specifically could be changed between the foreground and the background slightly? Experiment with adding a very light-handed shift to blue in the background compared to the foreground? Otherwise if not a color change, maybe the foreground characters could be slightly even more dark than the background.

      It's kind of funny saying this, because contrast is an area I am still learning in!
      Just some ideas. Your work is always so good!

      There is beauty in life!

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      • KevinTreaccar
        KevinTreaccar last edited by

        I vote A because the background looks more lived in.

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        • Georgios Christopoulos
          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett as an artwork I love A.as a cover, my instinct goes for B with less busy background. Really love A.Maybe consider adding it on the back cover,as a continuous artwork?

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          • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
            Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

            I like the bunnies in this image, they add some good storytelling!

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            • RachelArmington
              RachelArmington last edited by

              To me, they read more as spirit bunnies than actual giant bunnies. The bunny version feels better compositionally to me. And the pinkness of the bunny ears ties in well with the vermilion hamster ears. Intriguing!

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              • K.Flagg
                K.Flagg last edited by

                I vote for bunnies!

                K.Flagg

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                  jdubz last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett I voted for bunnies, but maybe not the "A" with bunnies here. I definitely think she should be alone on the page without the other character in the back. And I do think bunnies improves it, but maybe just not that pronounced, but still somewhat there so I'm like "What's all that dust from? Oh yeah, giant bunnies. Neat!"

                  sample.jpg

                  Maybe like super low definition but just the shapes?

                  Josh White
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                  • burvantill
                    burvantill Moderator @braden H last edited by burvantill

                    @Braden-Hallett Before the picts loaded with my slooooow internet I was thinking, YES giant bunnies! ALWAYS! But, after seeing the images, I think not this time. I love the giant bunny concept, its so great, but for the book cover I think the single bunny and rider looks more heroic. You could imply the giant rabbits in the dust clouds, maybe, subtle. You could pull that off. =)x

                    EDIT: just saw the last image. LOL! Well done. 👍👍👍
                    EDIT2: @jdubz Just realized that last image was not Braden's LMAO!

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      Thanks for the votes everyone! I think with some TLC I COULD make the bunnies work, but I've gotta send this off today, so no bunnies for now!

                      @jdubz said in A or B? Bunnies or no bunnies?:

                      @Braden-Hallett I voted for bunnies, but maybe not the "A" with bunnies here. I definitely think she should be alone on the page without the other character in the back. And I do think bunnies improves it, but maybe just not that pronounced, but still somewhat there so I'm like "What's all that dust from? Oh yeah, giant bunnies. Neat!"

                      sample.jpg

                      Maybe like super low definition but just the shapes?

                      I think in my head this is closer to what I wanted it to look like! I'll try this out. I MUST add the bunnies!

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                        jdubz @burvantill last edited by

                        @burvantill Lol that's funny

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