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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      Does this perspective seem ok? I brought it out a tiny bit so it could breathe a little more. I’ve never been good with perspective I think it’s like a math thing, I can’t ever wrap my brain around it! No matter how times I try to do the classes. Luckily for the most part I can fake it pretty well especially if I’ve got reference.
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      • Valerie Light
        Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @asyas_illos This is a cute sketch for sure, and I like the POV you chose. I'm finding the Lucky prompt really tough to nail down storytelling-wise. It's really hard to convey that someone is lucky BECAUSE of something. 🤷🏻♂

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

          @valerie-light l am having trouble with that too my first two entries I had to rely on the speech bubbles without them I don’t think they would convey what I intended

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            Moving along with the second to the series…
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              Ok sending this one in! I do want to ask if you guys think my character is consistent. I think I might do one more for good practice🤔
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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                This started out as sketch for "Riley" but with little magic and "bad luck” I now have another entry in the works. Do you have any feed back as far as story or composition? I cant remember what the guys said about illustrating the moment. Is it better just before, during or after? I did two positions for the bird indicating either the moment before or during. Which do you think is better?
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                • crispalomino
                  crispalomino @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos those little birds are everywhere, aren’t they? Heh. So position 1 doesn’t tell me it will end up at position 2. However, since the collision just took place, or so it seems, was she already riding off the hill?

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @crispalomino last edited by

                    @crispalomino lol yes they doing an epic jump!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      What if there were more birds! Muwahahahaha!
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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        Figured out my color palette now on to fun part!F39B0010-4FD0-4F25-ADD4-903A870EE57B.jpeg

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Tightening things up a bit😊B6B30597-C162-4DBF-9219-4A23C35452E6.jpeg

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Almost done with this one I’m glad I went with this because I needed more practice with environments
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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              All done!
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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                (sighs) yes, I started another one🤦🏻‍♀️ I had to do one that was a little more traditional, according to the month.
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                                • Asyas_illos
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                                  Not sure I’m vibin’ with my color palette…
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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Ok finished this one up to be honest I kinda lost momentum with this one…
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                                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos I think this one needs thickness to the wall. It took me a moment to realize that it was a cat peering through a mouse hole, and not the Loch Ness monster coming up from a lake. I could also just be very tired lol.

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                        @AngelinaKizz aww man you’re totally right! I didn’t catch that! It’s been submitted already and I don’t want to create more work for Austin so I guess it is what is…

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