coolest Treehouse WIP

von_Nimmermehr

can anyone help me out with the part of the ship i encircled?

I don't know why i struggle so much with this part ô_o
i tried it a few times now but it seems off to me

KevinTreaccar

@von_Nimmermehr I think the top line of your ship’s elevated platform is too sloped.

Basically, as I imagine a straight line coming out of the front of the ship as well as the flat wall you have boxed, I see the lines. Or quite pointing in the same direction. The second level line looks to me like it would be point a little to the left based upon the direction that second level cube’s side is facing.

Is that making any sense?

Everything else looks correct to me.

von_Nimmermehr

@KevinTreaccar

i dont think so, it fits perfectly into my grid i worked with.
Maybe i made something wrong thoug?

But i was more talking of the raling in the back...i cant figure it out thoug and also i dont know what to do with the front of the "box". just a window (I don't like the window Idea, since there already is a window)? Or a door? how big should a door be? Or how hight, i am sitting on that part for so long now its ridiculous

von_Nimmermehr

im getting closer to finish this peace....at least i didn't gibve up though.

Have you any recommendations how i can push the values more? i seems its just all the same values or maybe thats something i can fix later?

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Asyas_illos

@von_Nimmermehr oh wow I love how the tree looks like waves!

@von_Nimmermehr I love the concept and the drawing is very lovely.

Have you tried to lighten the value of the tree leaves/waves? That might make the boat pop more for the viewer.

Such a lovely piece, excited to see where you take it.

von_Nimmermehr

Thanks @Asyas_illos i really fell in love with this idea and im happy i got it to work though.

@Stephanie-H i made the colors of the leaves a bit brighter, also i changes the color to a liiiiittle bit more saturated.

i think i'm about to finish it. I will sleep over it and take a look at it tomottow again with some fresh eyes.

Do you think it's a portfolio piece? It would be my very first portfolio piece. for now i'm quite happy, i finished it or at least am about to

Mara Price

@Stephanie-H It's beautiful

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von_Nimmermehr

@Stephanie-H love the Idea, havent thought of it but would look cute and cozy i guess. Thanks