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    • PenAndrew
      PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos Did you see Rabbit road race is the july prompt!

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        Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

        @PenAndrew haha no I’ll check it out!

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Started a new sketch for storm any thoughts on concept or composition? Story is pretty simple just a pilot racing the storm and loving it!
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Think I’m going anthropomorphic with this one open to animal suggestions!

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                PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos The Falcon!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                  I’m thinking bear, maybe panda?
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                    Mike Marttila @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos I think a panda would be a winner! The only caveat there would be to make sure that the black patches of fur don't get lost in the dark storm clouds. Looking forward to seeing how this one shapes up.

                    P.S. Great work with the desert piece! I think you really nailed the sandstorm.

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                      Asyas_illos @Mike Marttila last edited by

                      @Mike-Marttila thank you and yes since I darkened the sky even more not sure how it’d work out.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        So sketched out some more characters what do you guys think Im stuck between two…
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                        • AngelinaKizz
                          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos I think the elephant is a good one, because you can lean his Grey into a blue and complement the orange while having enough contrast to the charcoal clouds. You could also push the size to make it funnier.

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                            Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                            @AngelinaKizz yes I would definitely increase his size for sure!

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                            • KevinTreaccar
                              KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by KevinTreaccar

                              @Asyas_illos I also vote for the elephant.

                              A) Thanks to its weight, it’s the funniest in a plane.
                              B )I think the giraffe would need to be in a more uniquely shaped craft to fit right.

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                Well I did one one with a person just to see and I like it too…
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                                • demotlj
                                  demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                  Both the elephant and the giraffe made me laugh as soon as I saw them so I vote for those.

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                                  • ArtMelC
                                    ArtMelC @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos elephant has my vote!

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                                    • Kristen Lango
                                      Kristen Lango @demotlj last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos I second what @demotlj said!

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        Playing with size and cropping
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                                          Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          @Asyas_illos I like the composition of the first one. It brings more focus to the storm itself and not whoever is in the plane, though. Which do you want to focus on?

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                                            Asyas_illos @Patricia Dishmon last edited by

                                            @Patricia-Dishmon thank you and I agree I have since decided to omit the plane and going hot air balloon!
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