WIP Portfolio piece: farm animal field trip

[kayleenartlover]

@tom-barrett which picture are you referring to?

[kayleenartlover]

How does this look? I tried to exaggerate the tires so it wouldn’t look stiff. Any tips on the line weight? Should I make any lines thicker?

[kayleenartlover]

Here’s the colored version of the bus. If it doesn’t need any changes, then all that’s left is the animals driving/riding it and other details like in the thumbnail.

[kayleenartlover]

Should I move the back right tire where it was supposed to go perspective-wise or would that make it look more stiff? Does it look like there is movement happening if I leave it the way it is? I plan on adding a hill below it like it's catching air going over it.

[makekong]

@jenn yes! Those flying buses are soo rad lol

[makekong]

@kayleenartlover

I think it should look a bit like this, its off the ground so the wheels are not compressed against it

[kayleenartlover]

@makekong I haven't drawn the ground part yet, but it's gonna be kinda bouncing up, but I'll draw a sketch to compare

[kayleenartlover]

@makekong oh wait do you mean the tires are actually lower than the body of the bus?

[makekong]

@kayleenartlover yes because the springs extend like a frog jumping

[kayleenartlover]

@makekong oh that's a really cool way to describe it! Thanks!

[kayleenartlover]

I'm back at this project again. How do the animal sketches look? I want the bus to look full of excited animals making a getaway to go on their own field trip. Do the sizes of the animals look correct?

[kayleenartlover]

I’m so close to finishing this… How does the lettering look? Should I make the drawing bigger and have the road drawn to the bottom of the page, or keep it a centered vignette?

Here’s a closeup of the bus:

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