April 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

[kayleenartlover]

This is technically not finished (no color and final touch-up details) but was pretty sure I wouldn't have time to do that stuff until after the due date. Really hoping I get a good grade on story since that is what I'm working on improving. Happy Easter and spring break everyone!

[jetzyey illustrations]

Hi, my name is Jelena (read like Yelena) based in the UK. I have worked on a few children's picture books and I am trying to improve my backgrounds and focus point.

Thanks for considering for a critique

I have only an Instagram at the moment
https://www.instagram.com/jetzyey/

[Anne-Marie Kommers]

[GabeRobinson]

Here's my submission for the April prompt. Thanks!

Gabe

[Melody Calley]

Here is my submission!

[Christijan]

[Yiming Wu]

@GabeRobinson I really love the clear silhouette and color segmentation of this composition. Also the texture of the paper works really well with the style of your figure!

[Jim Gleeson]

So here is mine. I wanted to go with a more modern castle idea.

jimgleeson@mac,com
visualbanter.com

[MarcRobinson]

I decided to make it a bit like a comic page because that felt like fun! How far would YOU go to protect your N64?

[Melody Calley]

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[Fey Realme]

Heres mine

I also changed my march sub based on what they said in the crit that the original griffin drawing was too cool and was distracting from the story i was trying to tell

[Larue]

' After recovering the Griffins stolen jewel, Jack took off running and with only moments before capture by the guards he reached the edge of the castle tower and leapt just as the gryphon was swooping by….

[Oana]

Here is mine! I wanted to suggest a story in wich Jack has first rescued the Griffin and now they escape together, I wonder if it comes through

[skeletortoise]

Jack the Pirate makes off with what treasure he can carry. He finds himself cornered by the old crew who are still guarding the tower's hoard. Will his griffin make it in time to save him?

[Tash]

[Larue]

@GabeRobinson
Really nice watercolor Gabe. Love the rich colors and strong silhouettes at the bottom. Good storytelling!

[Larue]

@Anne-Marie-Kommers
Clever point of view and well done!

[Larue]

@jetzyey-illustrations
Nice action!

[Larue]

@grimm
Great use of silhouette and framing, beautiful quiet background.

[Larue]

@Jason-Crowley
This came out really well!