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    • Katie W
      Katie W last edited by

      Great improvement with the shadow of the wolf! It all looks awesome!

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      • Joy Heyer
        Joy Heyer last edited by

        @Suzy-Heitz, @lmrush, @Rich-Green, @Katie-W Thank you so much!
        @Lee-White Your critique TOTALLY helped! It's amazing how getting input helps open ones eyes to what is needed. Thanks!

        Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
        Instagram: joy_illustrated
        Website: joyheyer.com

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        • lmrush
          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Would you mind posting the before for those of us that haven't seen it?

          Lisa Rush
          www.lisarushgallery.com
          www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
          www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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          • Joy Heyer
            Joy Heyer last edited by

            Sure! Here it is. 0_1475601795687_joyheyerfallcrit1.jpg

            Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
            Instagram: joy_illustrated
            Website: joyheyer.com

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            • smceccarelli
              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Wonderful piece! The changes really are a big improvement!

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              • Charlie Eve Ryan
                Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Love the added piggies and the background details! Nicely done!!

                Happy Creating
                www.charlieeveryan.com

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                • Dulcie
                  Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                  It was a great piece before, and now even better! I thought this was a really interesting critique to watch and well done for implementing the advice so well...the transparent shadow is so much better, love the pictures and added piggies - it's a lovely portfolio piece 🙂

                  www.dulciemascord.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/dulciemascord
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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Thank you so much for sharing!!!! I can't wait to watch the critique, you must be so proud of this piece! The first piece was great, the additions make you a pro!

                    Lisa Rush
                    www.lisarushgallery.com
                    www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                    www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                    • mattramsey
                      mattramsey last edited by

                      Definitely a portfolio piece. Fantastic work.

                      https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
                      https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
                      https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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                      • mcucchi
                        mcucchi last edited by

                        Great job!!

                        portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
                        instagram.com/crookedandbeautiful
                        shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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