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    • kaitlinmakes
      kaitlinmakes last edited by

      I agree with @Jabbernewt about number 2

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      • Eli
        Eli last edited by

        I like 2 also.

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        • Davidingalls
          Davidingalls last edited by

          I’m on team 2 but like 1 a lot also.

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          • SarahLuAnn
            SarahLuAnn last edited by

            2 is my favorite, 1 is also nice. 3 just doesn't have great silhouettes.

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            • nasvikdraws
              nasvikdraws @TessaW last edited by

              @tessaw Can't wait to see where this one goes. You can feel the energy. The perspective, the characters are very dynamic.
              I see everybody is leaning towards the second one and I see that that one has the most specific mood and atmosphere. However, to me there is a slight disconnection between the warm colors, the cozy Christmas lights and the energy in the characters. I would further emphasize the characters' imagination with lighting and colors. I would merge somehow the cozy room interior with harsh lighting and futuristic colors of a grandiose concert.
              I am rooting for this one šŸ™‚

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                I like #2 the best. I can see how #1 would be a lot easier to pull off, though.

                Either way, it's gonna look awesome!

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                • Jabbernewt
                  Jabbernewt @braden H last edited by

                  @art-of-b said in Music Wip- Update- Color Help:

                  I like #2 the best. I can see how #1 would be a lot easier to pull off, though.

                  Either way, it's gonna look awesome!

                  Agreed!

                  Pax

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                  • burvantill
                    burvantill Moderator @TessaW last edited by

                    @tessaw 2! I liked it before and now I like it more. 😃

                    Lisa Burvant
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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                      @TessaW I like #2 and #3. #3 feels more like a dream to me where #2 feels more real.


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                      • Mandy Forte
                        Mandy Forte last edited by

                        I like #1. It has more of a surreal feeling. Which helps sell the floating. When I look at #2 I find myself trying to figure out if they are jumping or how they are laying on the floor or what is going on in general, just because the colors feel more real.

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                        • TessaW
                          TessaW last edited by TessaW

                          Guys, thanks so much for the feedback. It's really pushing me to get this done. I've decided to go with #2 and I am also going to attempt to bring in a hint of concert lighting at the very end, to see if I can get a little bit of a combo of #2 and #3 going on. If it doesn't work out, I can always just delete the layers. This made me realize I didn't even look at concert photos when I was trying to figure out the lighting of this piece. Duh.

                          Here's a work in progress. Still a lot to be done. My main focus right now is figuring out the local colors of things and building up the light and shadow and cleaning up the forms. Then I'll probably add the wires to the amps/instruments (which I'm hoping will sell the idea that they are floating better), and figure out the hair a bit more. Last will be playing with hints of concert lighting.

                          0_1535297921355_Music 2018 Color Final First Pass WIP.png

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                          • chrisaakins
                            chrisaakins last edited by

                            Wow. @TessaW this is looking great. I really like the lights in the background. This is so creative.

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                            • Kevin Longueil
                              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                              @tessaw really nice!!

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                              • W-Coats
                                W-Coats last edited by

                                Exciting Tessa! you rock! šŸ™‚

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                                • TessaW
                                  TessaW last edited by

                                  Thanks guys! I bit more progress. I'm trying to figure out the design of the cords. Not sure if I can get this done in time.

                                  0_1535390408573_Music 2018 Color Final First Pass Backup copy.png

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                                  • Chip Valecek
                                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                                    @tessaw I love watching your progress. Its going to be a great piece when you are done. One thing I would watch out for is the cord going around the neck of the keyboard player. Maybe move it lower of her back so its not going to choke her. Also the cord at the top right leads my eye of the page, maybe bring that around to the left side to keep the viewers eye moving around the piece.


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                                    • Jason Bowen
                                      Jason Bowen SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                                      @tessaw Keep going this is looking awesome!

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                                      • kaitlinmakes
                                        kaitlinmakes last edited by

                                        Oh my gosh - this piece is awesome!

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                                        • lmrush
                                          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          Looks great, the lighting is amazing!

                                          Lisa Rush
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                                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                                            @tessaw oh my gosh! This is Gorgeous! AMAZING!!!!! I love you color! I love your composition! I love it all!!!

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