Fall WIP
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Pushed it a bit further. Made linework and value layout. What are your thoughts on that? I am not sure by the values much. Thank you for any comment
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Love that you are trying to challenge yourself. I Also love the description you put for this one.
Would be neat to somehow extend the drawing to the side and add a scene of a cup of hot tea on a table or a kettle on the stove or something like that. Just an idea
Can’t wait to see where you go with this!
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@squirrelsize Oh yes, that can help with clarity in the picture! Thanks a lot
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I like how the pumpkins are stowed away. Makes me want to see more gourds hanging out. I like that you’re challenging yourself too. This forum is a safe space to throw your art out there and get constructive feedback, I think it may be my favorite thing about svs.
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Thank you for so much feedback! I love this forum. @Squirrelsize yes I think extending it a bit helped it and @JudeKill I add 3 more gourds to the bottom, but maybe there can be more hehe.
anyway, what do you think about where it is heading
Open to any feedback.
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Yes! That extra scene to the side allows the eye to flow over the drawing way better! Love this dude!
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Showing this one more time in value phase. Just to make sure the focal point is clear to you guys and overall if it feels right.
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Ok, finally I think the values are in a place that I can move further on so I decided to finally work on color (also I changed the background because I was very unhappy with the last one)
This is the first shot and I definitely want to explore more color schemes. but do you guys think I am going the right way? Thanks again for every comment. You are the best!
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I played with the colors more and tried a cooler variant too which I probably like more than the more warm one.
But what do you guys think?
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@jonas-zavacky I like the cooler variant as well
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Dude! Looking great! I love the changes you did in the side room scene. I like the second one with the green cabinets because of the warm yellow lighting. Definitely feels warm in that room.
I like the first one with the red in the cabinets bouncing off the color of her scarf. Good stuff bro -
Looks great. Man...I like both. I think I like the cool colors on her more, though.
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Thank you for the feedback! @TessaW @Squirrelsize @chrisaakins
I think I will go with the cooler one, but I will push the warmth of the side room more to get the feeling I am looking for.
Thank you!! ^^
